[Rita] - 2021년 9월 17일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up at 10AM. I slept late last night. So I couldn't get enough sleep. I had to meet my boyfriend. We had to have lunch at the cafe. I like going to the cafe. I like it there. So I went to 용산 station and I met my boyfriend. We walked to the cafe. It was hot today. So I felt like my skin was burning.

We arrived at the cafe. There were so many peoples. We didn't book. But there was an empty spot. We didn't like the seat but we sat there. We odered a sandwich and coffee. It was good but too small. We were hungry. And we got out of the cafe.

We went to a new cafe. We were going to drink coffee but we drank whisky. And we met our friends and we had dinner.

Tonight,my boyfriend went to work. And we came back to my house and we drank wine all night.

It was a long and fun day.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I usually wanted to go to the cafe. I like there.' -> 'I like going to the cafe. I like it there.'

2. 'We arrived to the cafe.' -> 'We arrived at the cafe.'

3. 'But there has a seat.' -> 'But there was an empty spot.'

4. 'And we got out the cafe.' -> 'And we got out of the cafe.'

5. 'we drink whisky.' -> 'we drank whisky.'

6. 'we came back to my home and we drink wine all night.' -> 'we came back to my house and we drank wine all night.'

7. 'It was long and fun day.' -> 'It was a long and fun day.'