[Rita] - 2021년 9월 18일

[rita1201]

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Today was a hard day. My friends and I woke up at 12AM at my home. They slept last night at my house. So we had lunch near my home. And we went to my favorite cafe. I ordered milk shake and we sat at the corner of the cafe. My milk shake came out. I liked it. The milk shake was smooth and sweet. But I think they changed something in the milk shake. It was better last time.

Anyway I drank it all. I actually had a hangover. I wanted to come back to my home. I walked from the cafe to my home for 15mins. And I took a nap.

I woke up at 7PM. I cooked 라면 and I ate. I was tired today.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'my home' -> 'my house'

2. 'I odered a milk shake and we sat a conner of the cafe.' -> 'I ordered milk shake and we sat at the corner of the cafe.'

3. 'I like that. The milk shake is smoth and sweet.' -> 'I liked it. The milk shake was smooth and sweet.'

4. 'But I think The shake had changed something.' -> 'But I think they changed something in the milk shake.'

5. 'It was better in the past.' -> 'It was better last time.'