[Rita] - 2021년 9월 20일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

This week was 추석. I woke up ealry today. Because I had to go to Busan. So I took a taxi and I went to the KTX station.

I got off the taxi and I got on the train at 7:50AM. I could only sit on a window seat. Because it was Covid-19. I liked that. While I was going to Busan, I slept on the train. After 2hours 30mins, I arrived at the Busan station. I went to my family house by subway. On my way to family house, I went to old house for a while. My family moved 5months ago. So we recently decided to repair our old house. Anyway I mat my parents at the house. And we talked about repair the house.

In the afternoon, we came back to our house. And we had dinner. My sister went out to hang out with her friends for a day. We don't have an ancestral rites. So we are free. We wanted to go on a trip. But we couldn't. I hope to go on a trip. I think it will be possible soon. After dinner, we wathed a Netflix for 3hours. And we slapt.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'This week is holidays.' -> 'This week was 추석.'

2. 'So I took the taxi and I went to KTX station.' -> 'So I took a taxi and I went to the KTX station.'

3. 'I could only sat a window seat' -> 'I could only sit on a window seat.' or 'I could only sit by the window.'

4. 'I arrived to Busan station.' -> 'I arrived at the Busan station.'

5. 'I went to family house by subway.' -> 'I went to my family house by subway.'

6. 'On my way to family house, I went to old house for a while. My family moved 5months ago. So we recently decided to repair our old house. Anyway I mat my parents at the house. And we talked about repair the house.' -> 수업시간에 같이 보겠습니다.

7. 'I think it will soon possible.' -> 'I think it will be possible soon.'