[Rita] - 2021년 9월 27일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I had to go to the hospital today. So I slept enough and I woke up late. And I ate toast with milk for lunch. After lunch, I went to the hospital by taxi. I arrived at the hospital and I waited for my doctor. I made a reservation. But the hospital was crowded with people. So I waited for my turn for 40 mins. After 40 mins, I had a checkup. And I came out of the hospital. I walked to the bus stop and I came back home by bus. On my way home, it suddenly rained. I didn't have an umbrella. So I got off the bus and I walked home quickly.

I wanted to sleep early. Because I have to to go the hospital again tomorrow. I wad tired. Before I went to bed, I wrote a diary.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I arrived the hospital' -> 'I arrived at the hospital'

2. 'the hospital were crowded' -> 'the hospital was crowded'

3. 'And I came out from the hospital.' -> 'And I came out of the hospital.'