shawn-hy1232
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2 years ago Good!
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'I woke up 9AM.' -> 'I woke up at 9AM.'
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'So we were together.' -> 'So we went there together.'
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'The hospital is far away' -> 'The hospital was far'
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'I liked 김치찌개' -> 'I like 김치찌개'
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'I didn't want to go again' -> 'I don't want to go there again.'
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I woke up at 9AM. I had to go to the hospital until 11AM. So I met my boyfriend near my house. We went to the hospital by taxi. I could go alone. But my boyfriend had a day off today. So we went there together. The hospital was far. It took 20mins to go to the hospital. I was late. So I went to the 6th floor. And I met my doctor.
After my treatment, we wanted to have lunch. So we walked near the hospital. We found a pretty restaurant. But the place was full of people. So we didn't go. We walked again and we found another restaurant. And we ate 김치찌개 for lunch. It was good. I like 김치찌개. So I like to find a new 김치찌개 restaurant. While we were eating, we wanted to drink beer. But my doctor told me not to drink for a few days. So I held it. After lunch, we drank coffee.
After 20mins, I had to go to work in the afternoon. So I went to work by taxi. And I worked. We recently finished all of the projects. So we are relaxed. I got off work at 6PM. I had to meet my boyfriend at 서울숲. So I walked to 서울숲. And we went to the Oyster bar. I didn’t eat anything. But I went there because my boyfriend had a day off and he went to the hospital for me. We ate oyster, pasta and something. I didn't like it. I don't want to go there again. So we went out and we came back home.