shawn-hy1232
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2 years ago Good!
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'the bookstore was put out of business.' -> 'the bookstore went out of business.'
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'I like a book and I enjoy reading a book.' -> 'I like books and I enjoy reading books.'
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
The weather was good today. I woke up on time and I went to work at 10AM. I wore a denim jacket. I like fall.
In my office, I worked all morning.
And my co-worker and I had lunch at the usual spots. After lunch, we walked around our office. I wanted to go to a book store. So I told my co-worker to go to a bookstore with me. They liked it. It took about 10mins to walk to the bookstore. But the bookstore was closed so we saw another shops near the bookstore. I think the bookstore went out of business. I was so sad. I think many bookstore are closing these days. I like books and I enjoy reading books. So we came back to our office and I bought a book on the internet. And I wrote a diary a little bit.
I got off work at 6PM and I walked to 성수 subway station. I will go home. While I am waiting for the subway, I writing a diary.