[Rita] - 2021년 10월 1일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up early today. I didn't often wake up in the morning. So I am trying to wake up early. I took a shower and I wanted to have breakfast. So I ate two toast and a glass of milk, orange juice. While I was having breakfast, I watched news And I left my house. I walked to subway station and I took the train. I don't listen to the music on the subway these days. I don't know where is my earphone. So I hope to read a book on the subway this time. ( this opportunity) I bought a book yesterday. The book is about investments. So I studied the book last night.

Anyway, I arrived at my office. I was the first. I felt good. I turn on the music and I drank a cup of water. The weather is good these days.

I had to meet my friend tonight. She is Juhee. She is an old friend of mine. We met in college. So I wanted to get off work on time.

At noon, my co-worker and I had lunch late. Because we had to go to a book store. After lunch, we walked to a book store. The book store was small and pretty. The book shop is in 새촌street. I went to the street for the first time. I liked it. We read books and we didn’t have time. So 30 mins later, we came back to our office and I worked. While I was working, I wrote a diary a little by little. It was okay because it was break time.

I got off work at 6PM. I am on my way to meet Juhee now. So I am writing a diary on the subway. I think I will go home late. We are going to eat 닭발 in 이태원.
I am happy😀

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I didn't often wake up in the morning.' -> ??

2. 'While I had breakfast, I watched a news.' -> 'While I was having breakfast, I watched news.'

3. 'And I went out at my house.' -> 'And I left my house.'

4. 'friend of me.' -> 'friend of mine.'

5. 'We mat the university.' -> 'We met in college.'

6. 'The book shop was in 새촌street.' -> 'The book shop is in 새촌street.'

[rita1201]

1번 : 앗 좀 잘못 적은 것 같아요 ^^;; 나는 자주 아침에 잘 못 일어난다.는 뜻을 하고 싶었어요. I didn't often wake up early.