[Rita] - 2021년 10월 2일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up at 9AM. It was Saturday. I met my friend near my house and we had lunch. And we went to a cafe and we drank coffee. But we went out the cafe because my friend had to go to work today. So my friend took a taxi and I walked to my house.

I bought a book this week. So I wanted to study the book. I sat at my desk and I started to study at 2PM. While I was studying, I got my friend text. She wanted to hang out with me tonight. And she was going to cook. I wanted to hang out with her but I had to study today. That was a promise with me. So I couldn't go.

I kept studying. I studied stocks and English for 6hours. It was hard and difficult. But I think it was a very necessary time for my future. So I proud of me. I am keep going.

Tonight, I was hungry. So I went to 망원시장 and I bought vegetables and something. And I came back to my house. On my way to my house, I bought 참치김밥. I wanted to eat 닭발. I packed 닭발 last night and I came back home. So I ate 닭발 with 참치김밥 at my house. It was so nice.

While I was eating dinner, I watched Netflix for 1 hour. And I started studying again. Stocks book were difficult to word. And I practiced speaking my English diary.

And I did laundry and I slept.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'But we went out the cafe' -> 'But we went out of the cafe'

2. 'I started to study at 2PM.' -> 'I started studying at 2PM.'

3. 'I got my friend text.' -> 'I got a text from my friend.'

4. 'So I proud of me. I am keep going.' -> 'So I am proud of myself. I am going to continue studying them.'

5. 'Stocks book were difficult to word.' -> 'The stock book was difficult to read.'

6. 'And I practiced speaking my English diary.' -> 'And I practiced reading my English diary out loud.'