[Rita] - 2021년 10월 3일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

Today was Sunday. But it was good. Because It is holiday tomorrow too. I woke up early today. I had an English class at 9AM. And I went to the class by bus. And I studied for 2hours with Shawn.

After the class, I walked to a bicycle reck. I have a monthly bicycle ticket so I usually ride a bicycle. Recently,our neighborhood got a new bicycle rack. I am good. I returned a bicycle and I came back home.

I made 순두부찌개 last night. So I ate 순두부찌개 for lunch. And I studied English. I had to meet my friends tonight. My friends are Brazilian. They came to Korea 2weeks ago. They invited me to their house. Before I go see my friends, I am writing my diary now. I am going to go to my friend's house by bicycle. I like to ride a bicycle.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'But I was good.' -> 'But it was good.'

2. 'I walked to bicycle reck.' -> 'I walked to a bicycle rack.'

3. 'there was a bicycle stop near my house.' -> 'our neighborhood got a new bicycle rack.'

4. 'And I studied an English.' -> 'And I studied English.'

5. 'So I was invited by them.' -> 'They invited me to their house.'

6. 'Before I meet to my friends' -> 'Before I go see my friends,'