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[Rita] - 2021년 10월 4일 #733

Open rita1201 opened 2 years ago

rita1201 commented 2 years ago

I met my friends last night. And I drank wine a lot. While we were drinking wine, we tried to speak in English. My friends are from Brazil. So they are good at English. It was difficult for me and it was fun. I will have to practice my English a lot. ᕦ(ò_óˇ)ᕤ

So I couldn't wake up early today. When I woke up, it was 1:30PM. It was late. But it was okay because I studied all this weekend. So I wanted to rest at my house today. I made a meal for lunch. After lunch, I took a nap and I woke up at 6:30PM. I met my boyfriend near my house. He wanted to watch 007 movie. But it was late. So we decided to watch a movie next week. And we went to 공덕 by taxi. And we had 오리구이 for dinner. The restaurant was empty. We went to the restaurant for the first time. It was not good. Afetr dinner, we walked. On the way to my house, we found a new park in 상수. So we looked around the park. It was good. One day, I got off work late. And I took a taxi and I saw the park on my way home. So I always wondered about the park.

After we hang out at the park, we came back to my house for 1hour 30mins.

shawn-hy1232 commented 2 years ago

Wow! Great Job!

  1. 'While we drinking wine, we tried to speak English.' -> 'While we were drinking wine, we tried to speak in English.'

  2. 'My friends live in brazil. So they were good English.' -> 'My friends are from Brazil. So they are good at English.'

  3. 'I will have to many practice English.' -> 'I will have to practice my English a lot.'

  4. 'But I was okay' -> 'But it was okay.'

  5. 'at 상수' -> 'in 상수'

  6. 'When I got off work late, I took a taxi and I saw the park on my way home by taxi.' -> 'One day, I got off work late. And I took a taxi and I saw the park on my way home.'

  7. 'After we hang out in the park' -> 'After we hung out at the park,'

  8. 'for 1hour 30mins.' -> Cross it out.