[Rita] - 2021년 10월 5일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

Today was Tuesday. And I had to go to work. I woke up early this morning. I am trying to wake up early these days. So I did it today. I went to work at the usual time. And I kept working. I had to sketch for my project but I didn't have an idea. So I was so sad. I was trying. I read a lot of books and I drew a lot of pictures. Before I got off work, I had a good idea. I think it was a relief. So I got off work on time. And I came back home and I made a meal for dinner and I wrote diarys and I am going to study now.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I woke up early today morning.' -> 'I woke up early this morning.'

2. 'I trying to wake up early these days.' -> Rewrite it.

3. 'I went to work usual time.' -> 'I went to work at the usual time.'

4. 'I am going studying now.' -> Rewrite it.

[rita1201]

다시 썼어요 !

2. I am trying to wake up early these days. 나는 요즘 일찍일어나려고 노력중이다.

3. I am going to study now. 나는 지금 공부할 예정이다.