[Rita] - 2021년 10월 6일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

It was rained today. So when I woke up, it was dark outside. I ate a vitamin and I went to work at 9:30AM. On the way to work, I read a book on the subway. I got the book last year from my friend Juhee. The book is about our home story. I recently met Juhee. She talked story of the book. But I didn't remember the book. She talked me to read the book. So I came back home and I found the book. Anyway, I read a little bit but I liked the book. I want to read books a lot these days.

At my office, I worked. And I had lunch with my co-worker. After lunch, we went to a cafe. I wanted to go to the cafe because the cafe had a pop-up store for a fashion brand. So I wanted to see the pop-up. We arrived at the cafe and we entered after we registered QR code. The pop-up was about living trend. I liked things a lot. I wanted to buy things but the pop-up was only showing. So it was a bummer. But I was save my money.

After we saw the pop-up, we came back to our office. And I kept working.

I got off work at 6:30PM and I came back home. I made a meal for dinner. After dinner, I watched Squid game at the Netflix. It was gross. I don't like horror movies but I was curious. So I watched the show until late.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'It was rained today.' -> 'It rained today.'

2. 'I ate a vitamin' -> 'I took vitamin'

3. 'She talked story of the book.' -> 'She talked about the story of the book.'

4. 'She talked me to read the book.' -> 'She told me to read the book.'

5. 'a little bit but I liked the book.' -> 'little bit and I liked the book.'

6. 'I liked things a lot.' -> 'I like these things a lot.'

7. 'but the pop-up was only showing.' -> 'but they were not for sale.'

8. 'But I was save my money.' -> 'Instead, I saved my money.'

9. 'at the Netflix.' -> 'on Netflix.'

10. 'until late.' -> 'until late night.'