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Suggested re-organization of the document #14

Closed jimsch closed 7 years ago

jimsch commented 7 years ago

Section 4 - I would like to suggest the following reorg for the document Section X - Message #X - overview of what the message is going to accomplish - where it maps in the SIGMA-I protocol Section X.1 - Message structure - The CDDL description for the message Section X.2 - Message creation - Section X.2.1 - For Async - Section X.2.2 - For sync - use these two sections iff the differences are large Section X.3 - Message Processing Party->Message #X Section X.4 - Message Processing Message #X --> Party Again .3 and .4 can have subsections if the differences are large I would put the two key derivations (Section 5) steps as Section 5.1 and 5.2 (in protocol and post protocol)

emanjon commented 7 years ago

Organising by message, seems like a good idea.

jimsch commented 7 years ago

The difference was to reflect the current text where you have

Async/sync should have been Asym/Symm

fpalombini commented 7 years ago

We are considering this for the update after the next. But my doubt is that message 2 and message 3 may be different for symm-asym so to require sub-sections which would make the document hard to read.

fpalombini commented 7 years ago

Partly included in commit e684d9b2, we did keep symmetric and asymmetric separate though.

jimsch commented 7 years ago

Wrong commit referenced.

fpalombini commented 7 years ago

Right, I corrected it now. I have the feeling that the diff will not help much though, since the whole document was changed in that update.