Small edits / grammar fixes in Abstract, Intro, Methods, and Results.
Some re-arranging of and additions to text in the Discussion plus some suggestions on what else to add.
There are two things that need checking throughout the whole manuscript:
Any "ref" and "refs" placeholders have to be replaced with appropriate references (there are some of those in most sections)
Check out all remaining HTML comments I made throughout the manuscript (there are also some of those in most sections).
Small edits / grammar fixes in Abstract, Intro, Methods, and Results. Some re-arranging of and additions to text in the Discussion plus some suggestions on what else to add.
There are two things that need checking throughout the whole manuscript: