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[wounded4wolf]

A boy named (name) was from a middle class family with a dream of becoming a mountain climber; when he was young he used to see news of people climbing (name) mountain but mysteriously disappeared while climbing. From the time he heard the news he also wants to go for the adventure. The boy trained his hardest become the best climber and adventure expert in the world; he even won the title of having the best physique.

One day he thought to go for the adventure he was waiting for; he started his journey to the great mountain (name), one night he packed everything he wanted for his journey but suddenly he remembered that the mountain he was suppose to climb is a holy mountain and he first has to pray to the the holy god so that the journey goes smoothly and there wont be any harm during the whole journey.

as soon as the sun rises he woke up and take a nice cold bath and then move forward towards the temple for prayer as soon as the prayer finishes he grab his bags and then started to put his step forward for the greatest climb of the history the climb of the mountain (name); SIKRIT.

during his journey he found a large and long cave which opens up directly towards the foots of the mountain (name). the foots of the mountain was freezing cold. the journey towards the foots of the mountain was like to face the death himself, there were lots of enemies waiting for him and was ready to kill him with the magical weapons they posses YES the magical weapons, weapons that one can obtain by the gods or by the devils.

while roaming around the caves he found a monk who was meditating there for hundreds of years, as soon as he goes near the monk he opens his eyes and the conversation begins at the end of the conversation the monk gives the boy a book and made him drink the magical fluid prepared by the monk few years back yes the monk knows that the boy will come there and in order to find the answers to the questions that arises everywhere by everyone that what happens when someone tries to climb this mountain. so the monk gives the boy the magical fluid that gave supernatural strength but when one receives a power he must first learn how to control his power.

(NOTE: THIS STORY IS UNDERDEVELOPMENT AND THIS IS JUST A BASIC GOTHROUGH OF THE MAIN STORY.)

[DevKansara35]

The story has a strong base ,a clear determination of the protagonist , why he wants to climb that mountain , if we add a little spice of Indian mythology , we can include character like Vasuki (The sacred serpent wore by Lord Shiva) , Nandi , Mushak , Mayur & Lion (particular vehicles of Gods). Rather than that , in a middle of the story , we can twist the plot by raising the question like is the mountain natural or manmade? and more ...

This is a basic idea , can be modified in an alter way !

[ErrorDoc404]

But, as per the plot, the character didn't have to meet Baba. With the keyword 'holy mountain,' it's clearly and loudly described that we do not want to let others know initially. Yes, we can add all those little key points that Dev mentions, but we have to create a plot that reveals little by little because Sikrit is all about mystery. Dev can you check what way we can proceed to make it more better? also, I want to let my all power cards hidden till the end

[ErrorDoc404]

Draft 1

Faraway from modern civilization on a snowy mountain, there once was a peaceful village with lots of happy children and elderly. While the adults found it unnecessary, the elders of the village used to teach various melee weapon techniques to the children, who then used to play fight with wooden swords. The children heard their townhall bell ring which meant it was likely a snowstorm was approaching. They all ran to their houses, adults tied their goats hoping none of them would get caught in the storm. During their dinner, (mc) glanced at the window and noticed one of the goats was untied and in front of their house. (mc) acted on his instincts and ran out to catch the goat. As he got closer he noticed that the goat was actually an illusion and found himself lost. trying to get back home he was hit with a small hailstone on his head which led to him losing consciousness. He wakes up at the foot of the mountain and when he tries to get back up his vision starts to get blurry which leads to him losing consciousness again. When he opens his he notices thick legs over grass, which disappear after he blinks

Draft 2

The last thing he could remember was his dad's back as he was leaving his poor child in the middle of a snow storm. He concluded that wandering mindlessly in such a storm would be a deathwish so he decided to curl up on the snow bed trying to keep his body warm. after the storm had calmed down and the sun was up, he woke up to his stomach crying for food. Left with no choice, he started to follow the sun hoping to find anything he could eat. While walking he was confronted with an old man ( ). After a short conversation the old man takes (mc) to a small fortress on the mountain. In exchange for food and shelter, (mc) was supposed to help out in agriculture and study sword techniques. Time went on and (mc) started to get better at martial arts and more social than before, he slowly started to forget about the man who left him in the mountain and slowly accepted the place he was in as his home. He learnt that the people in this fortress hadn't always resided here, they used to live on a grassland with a lot more people than this which was later attacked by asuras who killed around half of their population. Their previous elder died protecting the village and were now led by his son, who inherited his father's knowledge. (Remaining story here).
As his final test he needed to climb to the top of the mountain 

@DevKansara35 please read both the draft and please let us know your thoughts