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Callisto Website - English Language Review #70

Open spatialiste opened 5 years ago

spatialiste commented 5 years ago

Proposal

Review the English section of the Callisto Network website.

Description

Some community members reported grammatical errors in the English section of the Callisto Network website, a proofreader native English-speaking could help us to identify and correct these errors.

Bounty

One time payment: 10000 - 30000 CLO.

epicmeatball commented 5 years ago

On the community guidelines page there is a double space in a bulleted statement under "Expected Behavior" CLO 1

epicmeatball commented 5 years ago

On the community Guidelines page there is a missing contact address and another double space under the "Addressing Grievances"section CLO 2

epicmeatball commented 5 years ago

On the Callisto Network Homepage the 's' at the end of "How Does It Works" should be removed. I have highlighted it. CLO Home

epicmeatball commented 5 years ago

On the Callisto Network FAQ page there is a confusing bit of text. I have attached the image and highlighted the wording in question. Is the Callisto token specifically called "Callisto Network" or is Callisto the token of the Callisto Network blockchain? Here is an example of correct wording "Callisto is a mineable token listed under ticker symbol CLO" CLO Ticker

epicmeatball commented 5 years ago

On the FAQ page under "Who is Behind Callisto Network" punctuation errors. This sentence can be altered in multiple ways. Here is an exaple of a grammatically accurate version. The co-founders are Dexaran, Yohan Graterol, and Carlos Sampol. We are backed by the Ethereum Commonwealth team. CLO Commas

epicmeatball commented 5 years ago

On the FAQ page under "Where Can I Trade CLO?" add an 's' to the word "exchanges" CLO 3

epicmeatball commented 5 years ago

On the FAQ page where it says "Is Callisto Network listed in CoinMarketCap?" change in to on CLO 4

epicmeatball commented 5 years ago

On the FAQ page where it says "Will there be other hardforks implemented on Callisto Network?" change "probably" to "likely" CLO 5

epicmeatball commented 5 years ago

On the FAQ page under mining where it says "How do I mine CLO?" change "during the time" to "over time" CLO Mining

epicmeatball commented 5 years ago

On the FAQ page under "How many CLO are rewarded per block?" you could update this section or refer to the roadmap chart showing the planned reward halvings. However, this is your prerogative. CLO Reward FAQ

epicmeatball commented 5 years ago

FAQ page under "Is CLO ASIC-resistant?" change the highlighted "a" to "an" CLO a to an

epicmeatball commented 5 years ago

FAQ page under "Why is smart contract auditing free?" change the highlighted "bug" to "bugs" CLO bugs

epicmeatball commented 5 years ago

In the "Our Team" section change the highlighted "I'm" to "i'm" -OR- to "I am"

Change "for as a" to "as" CLO Yohan

epicmeatball commented 5 years ago

Add a period to the end of the last sentence

CLO

epicmeatball commented 5 years ago

On the Callisto Network Financial Report page change "the" to "The" CLO Financial Report

kiwimalayalee commented 5 years ago

this photo5023932484785645608 should be Official....

kiwimalayalee commented 5 years ago

i think this should say

Wallets that support Cold Staking:

supports

kiwimalayalee commented 5 years ago

be better if this says Step by Step guide on how to stake on supported platforms":

supports

kiwimalayalee commented 5 years ago

be better to keep the naming consistent... as in Coinomi Wallet Tutorial wallet

kiwimalayalee commented 5 years ago

better to say After "the" planned Callisto hardfork No. 2... the

kiwimalayalee commented 5 years ago

big void in the paragraph void

spatialiste commented 5 years ago

Thanks a lot for your contributions guys, it's greatly appreciated and it will be taken into consideration soon.