[Bug]: Spelling issues in quest book

[swhitt]

Modpack

FTB Oceanblock

Modpack version

1.9.0

Log Files

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Describe the bug

• The quest for the Nether Painting says Take's instead of Takes
• The quest for the Creative Mana Tablet says Vaskii instead of Vazkii

Steps to reproduce

1. Open quest book to Exploration for the Nether painting, Endgame for the Mana Tablet.
2. View the respective quests

Expected behaviour

The spelling should be correct

Screenshots

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Additional information

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[Raidobw2]

Thanks for the report

[quietust]

As long as we've got an issue for quest description typos, I'll add these too:

Treasure Hunting:

• "End Painting" - the same "Take's" typo
• "Advanced Recycler" - "Input/Output be automated." -> "Input/Output can be automated."

Thermal:

• "Multiservo Press" - "Shape's" -> "Shapes"
• "Phyto-GroNade" - "An throwable grenade" -> "A throwable grenade"

Storage:

• "Upgrade Template" - "something big.This item" -> "something big. This item" (missing space)
• "Obsidian Storage Upgrade" - extra blank line at top
• "Common Black Hole Tank" - "For every 1000mb, is 1 bucket." -> "Every 1000mb is 1 bucket"
• "Black Hole Controller" - "...via pipes and tubes. But can hold..." -> "...via pipes and tubes, but it can hold..." (join sentences together)
• "Basic Bin" + "Advanced Bin" + "Elite Bin" + "Ultimate Bin" - "Store's" -> "Stores"

RFTools:

• All 3 "Dimensional Cell" and "Power Cell" quests - "Store's" -> "Stores"
• "Crafter Tier 1-3" - "The stored recipes using its internal inventory." -> (not sure how to reword this to be grammatically correct)

Powah:

• "Reactor" - "multi-block that generators energy" -> "Multi-block that generates energy"
• "Thermo Generator" - "require a coolant fluid" -> "requires a coolant fluid"
• "Battery" - "when is in players inventory" -> "when in the player's inventory"
• "Energizing Orb" - "its a block" -> "is a block", "require at least" -> "requires at least"

Misc:

• "Tier 5 Cobblestone Generator" - "every 1 ticks" -> "every tick" (or "every 1 tick")
• All Pipez Upgrade quests - "Transferring" -> "Transfers", might also be nice to mention the increased Liquid/Gas/Power transfer rates (which I don't know offhand)
• "Mob Fan" - "Direction" and "Faces" should be lowercase
• "Entity Conveyor" - "Conveyer" -> "Conveyor", "Horizontal Vector" should be lowercase
• "Personal Shrinking Device" - "tool allow you" -> "tool allows you"
• "Item trashcan" - "Item's goes" -> "Items go"
• "Fluid trashcan" - "Fluid's goes" -> "Fluids go"
• "Infinity Wand" - "1028 blocks" -> "1024 blocks"
• "Tesseract" - "will be between" -> "between"

Mini Utilities:

• "Unstable Drum" - "Holds 2,147,483,647 Buckets." -> "Holds 2,147,483,647 millibuckets."

Mekanism:

• "Metallurgic Infuser" - "mekanism" -> "Mekanism"
• "Crusher" - "From ingots into dust. Or making bio fuel!" -> "Makes ingots into dust, also makes bio fuel!"
• "Combiner" - "usefull" -> "useful"
• "Purification Chamber" - "Apart" -> "Part", "mekanism" -> "Mekanism"

Industrial Foregoing:

• "Animal Rancher" - "sheeps" -> "sheep"
• "Hydroponic Bed" - "combined" -> "provided", "growth crop" -> "crop growth"
• "Mob Crusher" - "player would producing" -> "player would, producing"
• "Mob Slaughter Factory" - also produces Pink Slime (and maybe mention that hostile mobs make more Meat while passive mobs make more Slime)
• "Sewer" - "in top" - "above it"
• "IF Generators" - "generators, that is powered by" -> "generators that are fueled by", "generator different amount" -> "generate different amounts"

Immersive Engineering:

• "Hammer" - "wrench like" -> "wrench-like"
• "Tank" - "Bucket's" -> "buckets"
• "Silo" - "41.472 items" -> "41,472 items" (period -> comma, to match all of the others), maybe also mention that this is 24 chests worth (since the number can look a bit odd otherwise)
• "Assembler" - "Autocraft's" -> "Autocrafts"
• "Mixer" - "Combimes" -> "Combines"
• "Industrial Squeezer" - "seed's" -> "seeds"
• "Automated Engineer's Workbench" - "Autocraft's" -> "Autocrafts"

Getting Started:

• "Getting String" - "and you free choose" -> "and you are free to choose"
• "Tempered Jar" - "it's process" -> "its progress", "dont have the right heat source" -> "don't have the right heat source" (or you don't have the ingredients)
• "Cast Iron Tube" - "Note tubes" -> "Note: tubes"
• "Manual Pump" - "stowed up energy" -> "stored energy" (?)
• "Auto Hammer" - "countless blocks. With" -> "countless blocks, with", "two chests, The Auto Hammer" -> "two chests, the Auto Hammer"
• "Empowered Sluice" - "Wanting super-sonic speeds." -> "Want super-sonic speeds?", "Well I present to you" -> "Well, I present to you", "countless blazes. The" -> "countless blazes, the"

Flux Networks:

• "Flux Controller" - "Network's" -> "Networks", maybe mention that it's only needed for Wireless Charging
• "Flux Storage" - "Network's" -> "Networks"

Endgame:

• "Creative Fluid Tank" - description is cut off ("Finally, something worthy of holding all of ")
• "Ultimate Singularity" - "in to" -> "into"

Draconic Evolution:

• "Basic Crafting Injector" - "untill" -> "until"; also, it's not completely useless (since it can still craft Mk1 Power Pots)
• "Projectile Velocity Modifier" - "innacuracy" -> "inaccuracy"
• "Projectile Penetration Module" - "innacuracy" -> "inaccuracy"
• "Chaotic Core" - "Example; 10000, 100, 0. 20,000, 100, 10,000" -> "Example: 10000, 100, 0; 20000, 100, 10000"
• "Wyvern Chestpiece" - subtitle, "fasion" -> "fashion"
• "Shield Control Module" - "Add's" -> "Adds"
• "Large Shield Capacity Module" - "boot's" -> "boost"
• "Auto Feed Module" - "well unless" -> "Well, unless"
• "Chaotic Bow" - "bow's" -> "bows"

Digital Storage:

• Refined "Disk Drive" - "Disk's" -> "Disks"
• Refined "Controller" - extra blank line
• AE2 "Molecular Assembler" - "andit" -> "and it"

Botania:

• "Alfheim" - "trough" -> "through"
• "Catalyst" - "Catalyst's" -> "Catalysts"

Blood Magic:

• Various - use commas instead of periods in numbers (e.g. "10.000LP" -> "10,000LP"), since that's what most quests use elsewhere
• "Tier 1" - "PL" -> "LP"

[Raidobw2]

Thank you very much Quietust for your time! We appreciate that you layed out all those corrections for us (and well formatted too, I have to point that out), we shall correct all of those errors in the quests :^)

[Kuktar]

@Raidobw2

I highly Recommend just using Grammarly. You can fix all of this with a single click. It is free!!!

I was noticing some spelling errors so I just had Grammarly check all the .snbts for FTBquests and it only came back with 118 errors. A large portion is because of silly phrases but about 30 or 40 spelling errors.

I am not a grammar nazi but there was one that had me rolling. "Tesseract" - "will be between" -> "between"

My English teacher used to give me an F for this lol

[Kuktar]

woops forgot to add the one i came here to report.

On the Manual Pump. finnicky should be spelled finicky

[Raidobw2]

I unfortunately did not do the quests, but thanks for the suggestion. I'll relay it to our modpack dev, which should relay it to the right person! :p Thanks for the typo report as well :)