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FTB Skies Expert Quest book Spelling/Grammar Audit #4996

Closed haveric closed 6 months ago

haveric commented 8 months ago

Modpack

FTB Skies Expert

Modpack version

1.5.0

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Describe the bug

I fell down the rabbit hole of finding spelling/grammar issues and found more than I bargained for.

If this needs to be split up into multiple issues, let me know and I will do so.

Chapter 1:
    Join or Create a team Island:
        anybook -> any book
    Flint Hatchet:
        wont -> won't
    Stringing you along:
        Bonemeal -> Bone Meal
    Plant Oil:
        Pnuematicraft -> PneumaticCraft (or pneumaticcraft - I'm seeing multiple variations throughout quests, but it probably doesn't matter)
    Ethanol, 
    Biodiesel:
        Pneumaticraft -> PneumaticCraft
    Soul Powder Block:
        engullfed -> engulfed
    Blood Sigil:
        Once its inside -> Once it's inside
    Taking Flight:
        As you fly you Broom -> As you fly your Broom
    Dragon Glass:
        At this point you should should be able -> At this point you should be able
    Enriched Peat:
        Its worth making -> It's worth making
        self sustain system -> self sustained system
    All that glitters...
        enchanting aparatus -> enchanting apparatus
        (Page 2) If you havent already -> If you haven't already
        (Page 2) Mastering the Ocult -> Mastering the Occult
    White Rock:
        Whiterock is needed -> White Rock is needed
    Pure Daisy:
        Remove the random "e." at the end of the second paragraph.
    Imbuement Chamber:
        (Page 2) neccessary -> necessary
    Ironing out production:
        Remeber -> Remember
Chapter 2:
    Elementalcraft Runes:
        has diffrent stats -> has different stats
    Space Material:
        Combine aluminum, copper in a pressure chamber and steel to make it. -> Combine aluminum, copper and steel in a pressure chamber to make it.
    4x Field Projector (The left one as apparently there are two):
        placed in a certain distance -> placed a certain distance
        eachother -> each other
    4x Field Projector (The right one)
        Pretty sure there's a double space between "The" and "Field Projector"
    Element Infuser:
        ontop -> on top
    Pyrolyzer:
        Pretty sure the blue color was meant to only be on Pyrolyzer, but is on the whole paragraph.
    Liquid Crystallizer:
        The Liquid crystalizer -> The Liquid Crystallizer
    LDPE Sheet:
        LDPS -> LDPE (I'm not 100% sure if the S was intended here or not)
    Force Gem:
        Liquid Crystalizer -> Liquid Crystallizer
    Cinnabar:
        yield Cinnebar -> yield Cinnabar
    91x Pressure Chamber Wall:
        atleast -> at least
        adventageous -> advantageous
    Thermopneumatic Processing Plant:
        which in turn into Gasoline -> which can turn into Gasoline
    Fractionating Still:
        the Fractioning Still is -> the Fractionating Still is
    Bucket of Redstone Acid:
        create a Etching Acid Bucket -> create an Etching Acid Bucket
    Molten Silver Bucket:
        A "|" is between the paragraphs that I assume shouldn't be there.
    Empty PCB:
        and it ready -> and it's ready
    Fluid Extractor:
        be to much -> be too much
    Bucket of Phenolic Resin:
        effectivly -> effectively
    Duroplast Sheet:
        by encapsulate some -> by encapsulating some
Chapter 3:
    Springaline Infused Desh Ingot:
        Manasteel Mesh -> Springaline Infused Desh Mesh
        additional amethyt -> additional amethyst
        that and refine -> that can refine
    Energizing Orb:
        into an items -> into an item (or "into items")
        certus quarts -> certus quartz
Chapter 4:
    Advanced Mixer:
        pnuematicraft -> pneumaticcraft
    RG Generator:
        Entagleporter -> Entangloporter
        Pneumaticraft -> Pneumaticcraft
Chapter 6:
    Microfusion Extrapolator:
        conentrating -> concentrating
        into as fissile -> into a fissile (I think that's how it's intended to read?)
    Do you like pina Coladas?
        at sunsent -> at sunset
        Thankyou -> Thank you
        to additional finish -> to additionally finish
Ex NiL:
    Soul Sand:
        how Soul Engulfing -> how Soul Engulfing works
    Springaline Infused Desh Mesh:
        into an Springaline -> into a Springaline
    Crushed Netherrack -> Springaline Desh Mesh:
        Using an Springaline -> Using a Springaline
    Soul Sand -> Springaline Desh Mesh:
        Using an Springaline -> Using a Springaline
        Soulsand -> Soul Sand
    Crushed End Stone -> Springaline Desh Mesh:
        Using an Springaline -> Using a Springaline
Logistics>Basics:
    Storage Controller:
        8 block radius -> 12 block radius
Logistics>Pipe Dreams:
    Conveyor belt section missing proper titles on all but the basic one
Logistics>Digital:
    QIO Drive:
        is more expense and -> is more expensive and
        you wont -> you won't
    Crystallizer:
        Using the Crystalizer -> Using the Crystallizer
    Applied Energistics 2:
        small contruct -> small construct
        blue print -> blueprint
Stuff 'N Things>Gadgets + Gizmos:
    Powerfull Anvils:
        (Not sure if intended, but assumed it should be Powerful Anvils)
    Jetpacks:
        is each better -> is even better
Stuff 'N Things>On a Pedestal:
    Tools In Pedestals:
        broken is effected by -> broken is affected by
    Fluid Manipulation Upgrades:
        Thee Fluid -> The Fluid
Stuff 'N Things>Base Expansion:
    Rock City:
        netherack -> netherrack
    Glassblower:
        The Glass Blower -> The Glassblower
    Construction Wands:
        place multible blocks -> place multiple blocks
Masterful Magics>Mana Manifest:
    Pure Daisy (Linked quest, not sure if needs to be done twice):
        Remove the random "e." at the end of the second paragraph.
Masterful Magics>Elemental Craft:
    Fireite Ingot:
        Firerite is a -> Fireite is a
Masterful Magics>Mastering the Occult:
    White Chalk:
        I can consult -> You can consult
    Soul Sand (Linked quest, not sure if needs to be done twice):
        how Soul Engulfing -> how Soul Engulfing works
    Soul Cage:
        firey -> fiery
        preperation -> preparation
    Soul Engulfing Concentrator:
        englufing setup -> engulfing setup
    Soul Pedestal:
        Spirit Sumoning Ponder -> Spirit Summoning Ponder
    Golden Chalk:
        Once You've -> Once you've
    Crushed End Stone:
        several cases of endstone which probably should be end stone (Also in some other quests, but I won't note all of them)
        have no yet -> have not yet
Masterful Magics>Ars Nouveau:
    Spellcraft 101:
        touch, projectile, or touch -> self, projectile, or touch
    Scribe's Table:
        enscribe Spells -> inscribe Spells
    Mimic Scroll:
        Place a configured Scoll -> Place a configured Scroll
        (Pages 3 and 4) Scribes Table -> Scribe's Table
Masterful Magics>Hexerei:
    Blood Sigil:
        Once its inside -> Once it's inside
    Taking Flight (Linked quest, not sure if needs to be done twice):
        As you fly you Broom -> As you fly your Broom
Technology>Thermal Expansion:
    Phytogenic Insolator:
        Using a Phythogenic -> Using a Phytogenic
Technology>Mekanism:
    Thermal Evaporation Controller:
        atleast -> at least
    Infused Alloy:
        Redstone and Iron -> Redstone and Signalum Plates
    Pressurized Reaction Chamber:
        With the Pressurized -> The Pressurized
    MekaSuit:
        can be intalled -> can be installed
Technology>Industrial Foregoing:
    Addons:
        three types of Range Addon -> three types of Speed Addon
    Supreme Machine Frame:
        Supremium -> Supreme
    Mob Duplicator:
        Mob Imprisonment Device -> Mob Imprisonment Tool
Technology>Air Bending and You!:
    Charging Module:
        inventory its facing -> inventory it's facing
        teleport is missing the t being colored orange
    Minigun:
        The Mingun -> The Minigun
    Camouflage Applicator:
        The Camoflage -> The Camouflage
        make camoflagable blocks -> make camouflageable blocks
        any camoflageable block -> any camouflageable block
    91x Pressure Chamber Wall (Linked quest, not sure if needs to be done twice):
        atleast -> at least
        adventageous -> advantageous
    Rotational Compressor:
        From your create producers -> from your create producers
    Thermopneumatic Processing Plant (Duplicate, but not listed as a linked quest):
        which in turn into Gasoline -> which can turn into Gasoline
    Pushing Pressure:
        transfered -> transferred
    PCB Blueprint:
        specialized knowedge -> specialized knowledge
    Thermodynamics:
        (Page 2) easierl -> easier
    Heat Sink:
        dissipate hate -> dissipate heat
    Finished PCB:
        By slapping -> Slapping (Alternatively, change up something with "Unassembled PCB will" to make this read better)
    I am (Compressed) Iron Man!:
        nighvision -> nightvision
        pnuematic devices -> pneumatic devices
Tetra:
    Tier 3 Hammer:
        The task need a -> The task needs a
    Combustion Chamber:
        Lubrication Dispenser -> Lubricant Dispenser
Armor + Weapons:
    MekaSuit (Linked quest, not sure if needs to be done twice):
        can be intalled -> can be installed
    Force Sword:
        Possible unintentional line break between Weapons and which (or missing words?)
    Elementium Sword:
        but in addtion -> but in addition
    Taking Flight (Linked quest again)
        As you fly you Broom -> As you fly your Broom
    Reforging Table:
        can allows you -> allows you (or "can allow")
Monster Hunter:
    By our powers combined...:
        questliens -> questlines
    Kill: 1x Wilden Chimera:
        Summona and defeat -> Summon and defeat
    The Price Is Wrong, Bob!:
        cant refuse -> can't refuse
Mob Farming and You:
    Mob Duplicator (Linked quest):
        Mob Imprisonment Device -> Mob Imprisonment Tool
    Farm some Nether Mobs:
        Overworld Monsters -> Nether Monsters
        Overworld Resources -> Nether Resources
    Farm some End Mobs:
        Overworld Monsters -> End Monsters
        Overworld Resources -> End Resources
To the Stars!
    Oxygen Loader:
        filling a Buckets -> filling Buckets
Overpowered:
    Do you like pina Coladas? (Linked quest)
        at sunsent -> at sunset
        Thankyou -> Thank you
        to additional finish -> to additionally finish

Steps to reproduce

Look at quests, see spelling/grammar issues. Enjoy puns along the way.

Expected behaviour

Not see spelling/grammar errors.

Screenshots

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Additional information

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Saereth commented 8 months ago

nice looking over all these I'll get them fixed for next weeks update

haveric commented 8 months ago

Found one more to add to the list:

Technology>Air Bending and You!:
    Advanced Pressure Tubes:
        connect these two can -> connect these to can

Also, if there's any way I can help fix these kind of issues more directly in the future so as to not waste your time, I'd love to help out.