I've given the paper a couple reads and I think it is quite good, particularly the box.
I'm submitting my thesis before next Friday, so I didn't have time to prepare more through comments, but depending on when you are planning to submit this, I can have some better thought through comments the following week---if you are trying to submit before then though, it's all good from my side.
I've given the paper a couple reads and I think it is quite good, particularly the box.
I'm submitting my thesis before next Friday, so I didn't have time to prepare more through comments, but depending on when you are planning to submit this, I can have some better thought through comments the following week---if you are trying to submit before then though, it's all good from my side.