Open MetaToshi opened 1 year ago
business badger, drama deer, gay frog, goth llama, and elderly possum concept characters. Was wondering if we should be making full body concepts or for the waste up. (just sketches/concept planning to do final assets w/vectors)
Feedback for A silly dog customer ordering a taco By Emily Tran https://github.com/GDACollab/TacoCat/issues/14#issuecomment-1402826540
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Hi!:D I love the color palate and outfit you went with for this, and would love to see more of the Silly Dog. I think something to keep in mind is that I hope to have the art in this game be lineless - so it might be good to experiment with this character again but without the outlines. I'd love to see more of the dog though, they're so character✨
- Caitlin "Catie" Morgan and Tori Moore
Feedback for: Badger by Collette Harrison https://github.com/GDACollab/TacoCat/issues/14#issuecomment-1404184521
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This guy strongly reminds me of the badger from the Fantastic Mr. Fox, and I think that's great✨ However - I think it'll be best to try and distance this character from him a tad bit - with the color palate or maybe a change in his outfit. I really like the toothy grin though, and that might be fun to keep around. Also, a front-view concept of the character's face might be useful.
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Feedback for: Deer
Same as the Badger that having a front-view concept of the face would be useful to have, and I think something to experiment on is the antlers. Using a reference of deer antlers could help you to better know where the prongs go - to help you build a stylized version of them for the final concepts. It also might be good to note that the story takes place in a warm location ( some area of California most likely ) so it might be good to give the deer an outfit better suited for warmer weather, but that's up to you
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Feedback for: Frog
I really like this frog
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Feedback for: Sheep
This design- I love this sheep✨ I think something to add though, is more of her - she's currently a bust, but having her arms and lower torso could help with conceptualizing her a bit more.
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Feedback for: Possum
This is a very interesting design, and I like how it helps add a bit more diversity in the ages of the customers. I'm curious on how this character will develop. It might be interesting to experiment with some other clothes colors/darker hues
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Overall Feedback:
I like the stylization of the eyes, and how you color the whites/add a small slit into the pupils. The cell shading/lineless art is looking pretty good so far. I think the shading/airbrushing colors add a lot to the pieces, but could be done a bit neater with a designated direction where the light source is from. That could help you to make the airbrushing a bit more consistent across pieces. Overall though - these concepts are very promising✨ and I'd love to see more of your work in the future:)
- Caitlin "Catie" Morgan and Tori Moore
a lil luna moth customer
These are some sketches of customer designs. I was looking for feedback on their silhouettes and some ideas for color palettes.
1/27 Feedback:
https://github.com/GDACollab/TacoCat/issues/14
1/27 Feedback:
https://github.com/GDACollab/TacoCat/issues/14#issuecomment-1404184521
https://github.com/GDACollab/TacoCat/issues/14#issuecomment-1404423121
https://github.com/GDACollab/TacoCat/issues/14#issuecomment-1405773379
Overall Thoughts: Could have more
Capybara and Crane Customer Concepts!
A silly dog customer ordering a taco