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Request a scope review (Buyers) #134

Open vickimcfadden opened 6 months ago

vickimcfadden commented 6 months ago

Navigation: (update)

Buyers' landing: (update)

Prohibitions page

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klohman commented 3 months ago

Update 5/22/24

rosamundtgov commented 3 months ago

@PowderD Updated this page. Let us know what you think; if you approve of the changes, can you comment here?

PowderD commented 3 months ago

@rosamundtgov good to move forward

weiwang-gsa commented 3 months ago

@rosamundtgov just double check with you , H1 heading is "Scope Review", but page title is "Request scope review", and there is H2 "Request scope review" under, wondering what is page title should be, should it be "Scope review" to matching with h1 heading? and should the path be "buyers-guide/scope-review" instead of "buyers-guide/get-scope-review"?

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weiwang-gsa commented 3 months ago

@rosamundtgov For this "Link to scope review page from ""OCOs seeking further guidance on these flexibilities are encouraged to submit a scope review outlining the desired flexibility." should link text be? I changed it to "request a scope review" as link text, is it ok?

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weiwang-gsa commented 3 months ago

@rosamundtgov it is ready for review at feature branch, please double check if my changes are ok in prohibitions page and buyer's guide landing page: https://federalist-76c8d2ee-2655-47f7-8fa4-63811842d0a5.sites.pages.cloud.gov/preview/gsa/oasis-plus/wwang/request-scope-review/oasis-plus/buyers-guide/request-scope-review/

rosamundtgov commented 3 months ago

https://federalist-76c8d2ee-2655-47f7-8fa4-63811842d0a5.sites.pages.cloud.gov/preview/gsa/oasis-plus/wwang/request-scope-review/oasis-plus/buyers-guide/request-scope-review/

Can you change "are encouraged to" to "should request a"?

weiwang-gsa commented 3 months ago

The menu order based on below: Buyer’s guide Landing page 0

weiwang-gsa commented 3 months ago

@rosamundtgov correction is made, also I set the menu order on previous ticket, please let me know if my assumption is wrong, it is ready for review: https://federalist-76c8d2ee-2655-47f7-8fa4-63811842d0a5.sites.pages.cloud.gov/demo/gsa/oasis-plus/oasis-plus/buyers-guide/request-scope-review/

rosamundtgov commented 3 months ago

Looks correct to me. @PowderD @ekidenda this is ready for your review.

PowderD commented 3 months ago

@weiwang-gsa @rosamundtgov Should this section be a link?

we can provide Market Research as a Service (MRaS) [complete-market-research/#]mras upon request.

weiwang-gsa commented 3 months ago

@PowderD great catch, will make correction.

weiwang-gsa commented 3 months ago

@rosamundtgov per Jon's comment, would you mind verifying below section links (two links) are correct or not as I can't clearly tell from the doc where link start and ends, so I just did based on my guess. It can be reviewed at feature branch: https://federalist-76c8d2ee-2655-47f7-8fa4-63811842d0a5.sites.pages.cloud.gov/preview/gsa/oasis-plus/wwang/request-scope-review/oasis-plus/buyers-guide/request-scope-review/

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Thanks!

rosamundtgov commented 3 months ago

@weiwang-gsa It looks correct to me -

weiwang-gsa commented 3 months ago

@PowderD or @ekidenda it is ready for QA review here: https://federalist-76c8d2ee-2655-47f7-8fa4-63811842d0a5.sites.pages.cloud.gov/demo/gsa/oasis-plus/oasis-plus/buyers-guide/request-scope-review/

ekidenda commented 3 months ago

@weiwang-gsa both links took me to the intended destination - to fill a scope review form or complete market research. Moving to done.