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Gibberlings3 / Road_To_Discovery_for_SoD

Connect the SoD Story Dots: make PC and officers aware and talk about the crusade's real purpose! Tracks the PC's knowledge and improves the officers' reaction about Caelar's plans!
https://www.gibberlings3.net/mods/other/road_to_discovery/
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Proposal String #20 #3

Closed vnebelung closed 2 years ago

vnebelung commented 2 years ago

String #20

The information you gathered is grave news, <CHARNAME>. The danger from Caelar's crusade is much more severe than the rampaging army we set out to stop! You did well to gather this intel in time.

Proposal:

The information you gathered is grave news, <CHARNAME>. The danger from Caelar's crusade is much more severe than that of the rampaging army we set out to stop! You did well to gather this intel in time.

Gitjas commented 2 years ago

Thanks for the suggestion. Your suggestion is grammatically correct but very formal. We'll leave in the original phrase.