Michaels review - Rephrase part of section 11.2

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Work in progress to propose a multicast extension to quic.

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Michaels review - Rephrase part of section 11.2 #45

Closed MaxF12 closed 2 years ago

MaxF12 commented 2 years ago

Regarding this part:

From Packet Number and Until Packet Number are used to indicate the packet number (Section 17.1 of [RFC9000]) of the 1-RTT packets received over which these values are applicable.

His comment is:

This is hard to understand, and I think it’s to do with “these values”. Replace with “the fields of the MC_CHANNEL_PROPERTIES frame”, perhaps??

MaxF12 commented 2 years ago

Closed by #60