In section 1.1 x0 and xi are represented using subscript, in section 1.2 they're represented using superscript. Unless there's a specific reason I'm not aware of, this should probably be changed so it's consistent
At the end of the first paragraph in 1.3 the opening quotes are backwards, in latex use `` for opening quotes.
Section 1.3 second paragraph, missing a space before (FP16)
1.3 third paragraph second sentence should be changed to either "...calculation, it may utilize..." or "...calculation, higher precision may be utilized..."
Section 1.4.2: "It's experimented that" isn't a phrase that makes sense. It should be replaced with something like "It has been experimentally proven that..." or "Experiments have shown that..."
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