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ITSCC comments against the Final Draft (v0.99) of the proposed HCD SD v1.0 #345

Open ansukert opened 2 years ago

ansukert commented 2 years ago

What is the change request for the SD? Please describe. The following comments were submitted against the Final Draft (v0.99) of the proposed HCD SD v1.0 by ITSCC:

  1. Section 2.2. Cryptograhic Support (FCS), P.21: In the middle of the page, there is a typo in the title "2.2. Cryptograhic Support (FCS)". Should be "2.2. Cryptographic Support (FCS)"
  2. Section 2.2.4 FCS_CKM.4 Cryptographic key destruction, 2.2.4.3 Guidance Documentation, p.26: In the top of the page, there is minor typo in the sentence “The drive should be healthy and contains minimal corrupted data and should be end of lifed before a significant amount of damage to drive health occurs, this minimizes the risk that small amounts of potentially recoverable data may remain in damaged areas of the drive.” That is, there is missing hyphens ('-') in “end of lifed” Should be "The drive should be healthy and contains minimal corrupted data and should be end-of-lifed before a significant amount of damage to drive health occurs, this minimizes the risk that small amounts of potentially recoverable data may remain in damaged areas of the drive."
  3. Section 2.2.5. FCS_COP.1/DataEncryption Cryptographic Operation (Data Encryption/Decryption), 2.2.5.3 Tests, P31: In the end of the page, there is minor typo in the sentence “The evaluator iphertext computed in the 1000th iteration is the result for that trial.” That is, ‘c’ is missing in “iphertext” Should be "The evaluator ciphertext computed in the 1000th iteration is the result for that trial."
  4. Section 2.2.7. FCS_COP.1/Hash Cryptographic Operation (Hash Algorithm), 2.2.7.3 Tests, p.50: In the top of the page, something wrong in the title “Testing of the trusted channel mechanism willShort Messages Test - Bit-oriented Mode” I’m not sure what “willShort” stands for. Remove “Testing of the trusted channel mechanism will” in front of “Short Messages Test - Bit-oriented Mode” in the title. But I’m not sure if it is right. This section would be related to the NIAP decision https://www.niap-ccevs.org/Documents_and_Guidance/view_td.cfm?TD=0233.

Describe the solution you'd like Address the ITSCC comments indicated above with the indicated corrective action.

Describe alternatives you've considered None

Additional context None

kwangwoo-lee commented 1 year ago

(2022-09-27 HCD iTC Weekly meeting) HCD iTC SMEs have reviewed the ITSCC's comments as followings;

  1. Accepted.
  2. Accepted.
  3. Accepted.
  4. Accepted.