Changed the following sentence: "Note that the remote service would not be a component of the EHR, but would use an API and web standards for communication, and could be a service hosted within the organization's data architecture / firewall or offsite."
Added "be" in "would not a component of the EHR"
Changed servlet container to service, to be more generic (not refer to Java)
Removed repetition of "hosted" in "or hosted offsite"
Changed the following sentence: "Note that the remote service would not be a component of the EHR, but would use an API and web standards for communication, and could be a service hosted within the organization's data architecture / firewall or offsite."