Commented by John and Graeme make the arguments more concise.
Reorganise the material in Sec 4 to present things in a more
coherent way, organised by topic. Reduce duplication of points
in places.
Remove "Roadmap" as a section 4 title as this is not
really what's presented. Point to continuing work in the
auspices of the HSF Training WG in the conclusion.
Many small corrections and a few more references added.
Commented by John and Graeme make the arguments more concise.
Reorganise the material in Sec 4 to present things in a more coherent way, organised by topic. Reduce duplication of points in places.
Remove "Roadmap" as a section 4 title as this is not really what's presented. Point to continuing work in the auspices of the HSF Training WG in the conclusion.
Many small corrections and a few more references added.