Hacktoberfest Update post text clarification and edits

[ruf-io]

Description

Clears up structure of text on update post, remove un-needed paragraphs.

Requirements to merge

• [x] My code follows the style guidelines of this project
• [x] I have performed a self-review of my own code
• [x] I have commented my code in hard-to-understand areas
• [x] My changes generate no new warnings
• [x] I have added tests that prove my fix is effective or that my feature works
• [x] New and existing unit tests pass locally with my changes