critical apparatus 000-000-019-098

[Ramona2020]

Hi! Just one minor edit in line 12 of the first resp statement, change "Encoded by" to "Basic Markup". Everything else looks spot on :smile:

[Ramona2020]

Hi Sophia, Before I can pull in your changes, I have a few corrections for you in the following poems: FDM-058-074-000-076 FDM-063-101-000-125 FDM-069-100-000-124 FDM-070-099-000-123 FDM-073-072-000-074 FDM-093-104-000-128

The problem is the critical apparatus element.You're using two <rdg> elements when you only really need to use one. For example in FDM--069-100-000-124 at line 106 you have the following: `

, ,

Both of the witnesses show the same change and that information can be expressed in oneelement like so:

,

You can list multiple witnesses in the attribute by just adding a space between them. Also, only use theelement to indicate textual differences from the lemma. See poem FMD-073-072-000-074, line 128:

; ; !

` Since FDM1861 is the same as U1857 you don't need to do anything there, just record the difference in FDM1868.

Let me know if you have any questions :smile: Ramona

[mmjseclark]

Hi Ramona! Thanks! I’ll have that done before our meeting next Friday and resubmit. Best, Sophia

On May 23, 2016, at 2:24 PM, Ramona notifications@github.com wrote:

Hi Sophia, Before I can pull in your changes, I have a few corrections for you in the following poems: FDM-058-074-000-076 FDM-063-101-000-125 FDM-069-100-000-124 FDM-070-099-000-123 FDM-073-072-000-074 FDM-093-104-000-128

The problem is the critical apparatus element.You're using two elements when you only really need to use one. For example in FDM--069-100-000-124 at line 106 you have the following:

, ,

Both of the witnesses show the same change and that information can be expressed in one element like so:

,

You can list multiple witnesses in the attribute by just adding a space between them. Also, only use the element to indicate textual differences from the lemma. See poem FMD-073-072-000-074, line 128:

; ; !

Since FDM1861 is the same as U1857 you don't need to do anything there, just record the difference in FDM1868.

Let me know if you have any questions 😄 Ramona

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[Ramona2020]

Awesome!

Sent from my iPhone

On May 23, 2016, at 2:31 PM, mmjseclark notifications@github.com wrote:

Hi Ramona! Thanks! I’ll have that done before our meeting next Friday and resubmit. Best, Sophia

On May 23, 2016, at 2:24 PM, Ramona notifications@github.com wrote:

Hi Sophia, Before I can pull in your changes, I have a few corrections for you in the following poems: FDM-058-074-000-076 FDM-063-101-000-125 FDM-069-100-000-124 FDM-070-099-000-123 FDM-073-072-000-074 FDM-093-104-000-128

The problem is the critical apparatus element.You're using two elements when you only really need to use one. For example in FDM--069-100-000-124 at line 106 you have the following:

, ,

Both of the witnesses show the same change and that information can be expressed in one element like so:

,

You can list multiple witnesses in the attribute by just adding a space between them. Also, only use the element to indicate textual differences from the lemma. See poem FMD-073-072-000-074, line 128:

; ; !

Since FDM1861 is the same as U1857 you don't need to do anything there, just record the difference in FDM1868.

Let me know if you have any questions 😄 Ramona

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[mmjseclark]

Hi Ramona, I have made the the Critical Apparatus corrections to the list you sent me and synced them with Purple Kitty. See you later! Sophia

On May 23, 2016, at 3:03 PM, Ramona notifications@github.com wrote:

Awesome!

Sent from my iPhone

On May 23, 2016, at 2:31 PM, mmjseclark notifications@github.com wrote:

Hi Ramona! Thanks! I’ll have that done before our meeting next Friday and resubmit. Best, Sophia

On May 23, 2016, at 2:24 PM, Ramona notifications@github.com wrote:

Hi Sophia, Before I can pull in your changes, I have a few corrections for you in the following poems: FDM-058-074-000-076 FDM-063-101-000-125 FDM-069-100-000-124 FDM-070-099-000-123 FDM-073-072-000-074 FDM-093-104-000-128

The problem is the critical apparatus element.You're using two elements when you only really need to use one. For example in FDM--069-100-000-124 at line 106 you have the following:

, ,

Both of the witnesses show the same change and that information can be expressed in one element like so:

,

You can list multiple witnesses in the attribute by just adding a space between them. Also, only use the element to indicate textual differences from the lemma. See poem FMD-073-072-000-074, line 128:

; ; !

Since FDM1861 is the same as U1857 you don't need to do anything there, just record the difference in FDM1868.

Let me know if you have any questions 😄 Ramona

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