Open lillianjwarner opened 8 years ago
Love the goul at Coney Island, but can you move the buttons down the page a little bit?
-Love the shrinking effect on your ghoul. -Might seem more ghoul-like if he was a bit transparent. Perhaps try adding an alpha channel.
The second one's background is pretty cool, and very consistent themes.
The goul is golden! Just moving the sliders/button down would be grand.
I love the Ghoul at the Sunset! The bright colors looked so cool =)
I like the theme to all your sketches! Nice job :)
The first sketch, it would be cool if the background changed so it seems like the ghoul is traveling the world, etc.
Good use of the sketch in a museum setting, gives it a realistic effect!
I love that at the museum the ghoul can have friends. Very cool
Great Ghoul! Very funny
Cool! I like the way you can customize the third sketch.
I like the consistency throughout the sketches! And how interactive they are. Maybe move the sliders down considering the navigation, but it sounds like you're already planning on that? Awesome work.
All really fun! For the ghoul at Coney Island, maybe reduce the amount of time it is off screen for impatient users
Maybe adjusting the frame rate or utilizing an array will help if the background is making the motion choppy.
Great design creating a gallery for the art piece.
Really funny! I liked the last one.
My three sketches are centered around the character I created for one of the previous homework assignments.
If I were a ghoul, I would go see the interactive Josef Albers exhibit at the Ghoul MoMA. As word spread about the interactive painting based on Albers' Example XVIII-9 from his book Interaction of Color, I would invite more ghouls to the exhibit (by pressing the "ghoul!" button).
The sliders control the hue, saturation, and brightness of different segments of the image/"painting." If you're viewing this on a desktop, it sometimes takes more than one click of the ghoul! button for a ghoul to appear on screen. If you're viewing this on a mobile device, the sketch does not have this issue.
If I were a ghoul, I would enjoy sunsets. I would be able to bounce up and down and increase and decrease my speed, too.
If I were a ghoul, I would be able to taunt people at Coney Island's Luna Park by swooping towards them and away from them. I'd be able to increase and decrease my speed, too.
The ghoul swoops off-screen, but it comes back after a second or two.