You have probably seen yourselves that the ToC cannot cope with some of the headings, those for 3.2.3 and Appendix A; perhaps shortening them is simplest solution :-)
Authors>> Ok, to be fixed in the -17 version of the document
You have 'his' in a couple of places which will probably draw an adverse reaction; perhaps 'their' (which is asexual).
Authors>> Ok, to be fixed in the -17 version of the document
Some minor grammatical quirks, of which I go on seeing more each time I read the I-D - not worth a new version of the I-D IMHO.
/This types of scenarios/These types of scenarios/
or else /This type of scenario/
/modeled in the augmented/modelled in the augmenting/
modelled certainly, augmenting I think
/provides a complete and accurate/provides
complete and accurate/
/suboptimal path than performing/suboptimal path than by performing/
/then stitch them/then stitching them/
or perhaps /stitching them together/.
Authors>> Ok, to be fixed in the -17 version of the document
See: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/teas/4n93tq8tVM54XKrvlsvPoqWLjQs/
Authors>> Ok, to be fixed in the -17 version of the document
Authors>> Ok, to be fixed in the -17 version of the document
Authors>> Ok, to be fixed in the -17 version of the document
See: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/teas/4n93tq8tVM54XKrvlsvPoqWLjQs/