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IHE Devices Service-oriented Device Point-of-care Interoperability (SDPi) profiles supplement specification materials and related tooling.
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MLJ Pre-publication review (1.2.0) #247

Open MaryLJ opened 10 months ago

MaryLJ commented 10 months ago

Issues/Comments

  1. On the title page, under the boxed text the starts with "Amend", in the first sentence, remove the underline bold text "some text".
  2. On title page, change "General information about IHE can be found at IHE to General information about IHE can be found at IHE.net.
  3. Section 1:2.3.13, first sentence, capitalize the word "profile" in "SDPi-P profile"
  4. Section 1:10.1, the first two paragraphs (below the boxed in text) should be combined into one paragraph.
  5. Section 1:12.1, second paragraph, second sentence, add a comma after concrete. "Actor groupings, including abstract with concrete, are detailed in Section 1:12.3.

Questions

  1. For the statement on the title page "A PDF version of the specification is available upon request", who should be contacted to get a PDF?
JavierEspina commented 10 months ago

Thank you for your comments, Mary. I just made a commit to https://github.com/IHE/DEV.SDPi/pull/246 to address your 5 editorial comments.

Your question about who should be contacted for the PDF is still open though. Ultimately, and for the coming releases, it will be me generating the PDF, but I guess we should name a more official contact point in that sentence (e.g. dev@ihe.net for IHE and devicesonfhir@lists.hl7.org for HL7 ??). Another alternative would be to drop the PDF somewhere and point to that place. @ToddCooper / @d-gregorczyk please advise.