Proposal feedback

[Gchism94]

Dear R-tisans-of-Visuals: Below is the score breakdown for your proposal. Details of things that should be updated/revised are provided in separate issues. As you address them, you should close the individual issues.

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	Available	Earned
Data	3	3
Proposal	5	5
Workflow	1	1
Teamwork	1	1
Total	10	10

After addressing the below issues, you will be eligible for full credit.

The proposal is sound, however some grammatical issues hinder reader experience:

1. Add "The" to "Pet Cats data set comes from"
2. Are the cats which live together good at hunting than those which live alone? - This should be "Are cats that live together better at hunting than those that live alone?"

There are also some accuracy issues:

1. type of food is not a column in the dataframe you showed at the top. List the columns accurately instead.

Points in need of clarification:

1. "We can also compare across neutered and spayed cats to understand hunting patterns." This is a little vague, why do you think this would be a significant effect?
2. "avg_ground_speed (the average speed of entire tracking period)" Give units where possible. What are the units here?
3. "avg_ground_speed, which will be derived from the geo-tagged dataset using data feature manipulation" Be more descriptive here than "feature manipulation". How will you actually derive this?
4. "act as a distinguish-er in the groups of the plot" I believe you mean that it will act as a means to differentiate groups in the plot?

Suggestions:

1. "The color of the bubbles will be determined by the age of the cats." It is a little odd to see all continuous variables for bubble plots. I suggest binning both speed and age so that the differences will be clearer.
2. "A Violin plot can also be a suitable plot here." I don't agree, based on what you're trying to visualize. A bubble chart is likely sufficient. Since you're essentially trying to find correlations, I suggest a ggpairs visual showing a combination of correlations and maybe density plots.
3. Give me more information as to why spaying and neutering might influence hunting.
4. Question 2 is not as descriptive as question 1. Which variables are on which axis?

[visalakshi2001]

[FIX]

We have applied the changes mentioned in the issues and suggestions.

Thank you for the feedback!

[rahulbangad98]

We addressed all the issue open but regrading is still pending @visalakshi2001 @Gchism94

[Gchism94]

You've addressed me feedback, great work! Your final score for the proposal is the midpoint between the two grades: 7/10, 10/10 -> 8.5/10.