Closed KarynMC27 closed 1 month ago
Removed commented-out text. Revised copy to use more active verbs for conciseness and clarity using information from the STFC website. Made some adjustments to commas and capitalization for consistency. Can shorten text further if needed.
Looks good, thanks, I think the only bit I'll comment on is the phoebus part - I've added a suggestion for this.
Thank you! I committed your suggestion.
Removed commented-out text. Revised copy to use more active verbs for conciseness and clarity using information from the STFC website. Made some adjustments to commas and capitalization for consistency. Can shorten text further if needed.