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Eastern State Penitentiary's "Prisons Today - What Are Prisons For" interactive
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Prisons exist for other reasons - new header #110

Closed fleur2lis closed 8 years ago

fleur2lis commented 8 years ago

Other reasons for the recent prison boom

Our visitors think these factors have contributed.

jmaj commented 8 years ago

Can you clarify ?

fleur2lis commented 8 years ago

Header: Delete "Prisons exist for other reasons" Replace with "Other reasons for the recent prison boom"

Body Copy: Delete "Some critics say that other objectives helped drive the prison boom. Do you think any of these have contributed?" Replace with "Our visitors think these factors have contributed."

jmaj commented 8 years ago

Okay, thanks.