fleur2lis
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8 years ago Please note - I'm leaving the ellipse formatting as forwarded in their editorial feedback. It's killing my editorial proofreading brain but I've tried to clean it up and it keeps coming back so I'm letting it go....
They're using a 4 period ellipse (which is an ellipse + period to indicate the end of a sentence) at the beginning of a sentence.
conditional text depending on 1) most popular rationale & 2) follow-up question response rate (yes, no, unsure)
Deterrence: Not Effective …. And (percent) of those visitors think that our prisons do not effectively deter crime.
Effective …. And (percent) of those visitors think that our prisons effectively deter crime.
Unsure …. And (percent) of those visitors are unsure if our prisons effectively deter crime.
Rehabilitate: Not Effective …. And (percent) of those visitors think that our prisons do not effectively rehabilitate people.
Effective …. And (percent) of those visitors think that our prisons effectively rehabilitate people.
Unsure …. And (percent) of those visitors are unsure if our prisons effectively rehabilitate people.
Retribution: Not Effective …. And (percent) of those visitors think that our prisons do not provide appropriate retribution to lawbreakers.
Effective …. And (percent) of those visitors think that our prisons provide appropriate retribution to lawbreakers.
Unsure …. And (percent) of those visitors are unsure if our prisons provide appropriate retribution to lawbreakers.
Incapacitation: Not Effective …. And (percent) of those visitors think that our prisons do not incapacitate dangerous people in effective and fair numbers.
Effective …. And (percent) of those visitors think that our prisons incapacitate dangerous people in effective and fair numbers.
Unsure …. And (percent) of those visitors are unsure if our prisons incapacitate dangerous people in effective and fair numbers.