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Master Thesis on the concepts of Enterprise Architecture and Antifragility
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Discussed in https://github.com/JRBliekendaal/master-thesis/discussions/162

Originally posted by **edzob** May 5, 2022 "However, the resilient, robust (and company)" -> and company is denk ik verkeerd woord hier. "Taleb published the theory in his book ”Antifragile: Things that gain from disorder.” in 2021." -> in deze context is de vraag wil je 1st print of je gebruikte print als YYYY gebruiken.. "There is still no answer to how EA can contribute to achieving antifragility." -> of de literatuur die je nu hebt aangehaald stelt dit, of dit is je onderzoeksvraag. anders moet je uitleggen waarom je deze conclusie al dropped :) Public sector begint vorm te krijgen leuk om te zien ontstaan.