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Master Thesis on the concepts of Enterprise Architecture and Antifragility
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Originally posted by **edzob** April 19, 2022 Overall writing style. 1. Most sentences are written as “Author (YYY) stated that… Author (XXX) stated that … conclusion sentence. This does not read smoothly for the reader. Better is to write a story with after each statement the sources. 2. Search for reference to Botjes 2020 and see if it can be replaced by Botjes 2021 (residu is inevettable). 3. Botjes 2020 is referenced differently then Botjes 2021 (one is with last name the other is not, this should both be with lastname only)