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Rephrase ability to control it becomes a phobie (what is it) (Introduction) #74

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JRBliekendaal commented 2 years ago

our ability to control it becomes a phobia

<< Rephrase this. Our ability to control "it"? Control what? From "like routine" towards "feel in control" "of our lives" towards "fear of change" towards "to control it becomes fobia", does not read as a logical sequence.