Closed theScottyJam closed 1 year ago
This fixes some grammar errors, and it tries to improve the flow of the text where it felt a little clunky. If you don't like any of the changes or feel like I lost the spirit of the original text, I can undo any specific change.
This fixes some grammar errors, and it tries to improve the flow of the text where it felt a little clunky. If you don't like any of the changes or feel like I lost the spirit of the original text, I can undo any specific change.