Open egingric opened 6 years ago
egingric
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6 years ago Get those subtitles in the safe area. Linear keys - so the shots keep moving at start and end. Need better establishing shots. Stay on your sunset shot longer. Give me grander views. Too many similar shots of potion going in. Give me the adio back so I can better evaluate it.
egingric
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6 years ago Still need grander shots. Use the claps or lose the claps.
egingric
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6 years ago Record vo for all dialog that doesn't have it. Get those darn subtitles in the darn safe margin! Improve intro door opening shot. Start on white, fly backwards thru door way. Don't get so close to words above ingredients. Don't get so close to the pot. keep the lo-rez ness out of the shot. Gets boring after awhile, feels too long in themiddle. too many of the same shot of putting stuff in the pot. Break it up with those awesome shots you showed me in your level! Pleeeeeeeeese?
No sun moving... no crystals... To actual game: Add potion above pot. Player gets poofed when he walks up, game starts. (not trailer). We are going to show the the third person character from behind. Ending shows the door opening...light shines through... As the sun set sets.... These are the days of our lives.... Like sand through the hour glass...