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hw02 ready for grading #1

Open Jenncscampbell opened 7 years ago

Jenncscampbell commented 7 years ago

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ghost commented 7 years ago

Hello Jenncscampbell,

I think you did a solid job.

Reading through your readme page helped me grasp what your reasoning and approach was going through the assignment. I found your description of the View function from your readme to be informative. Similarly including a link from your readme to your data analyses was a practical utility.

The data analysis and exploration itself was sturdy. You provided interpretation in addition to function output thereby making it easier for a potentially new user to know what piece was relevant for a specific question. Sometimes code was not visible to the viewer in the .md file, but was included in the .rmd file (e.g. the first histogram). Not overburdening the viewer with code while still keeping it accessible is a fine balance to maintain, for the present reader you hit the balance well.

I think your discovery that Oceania had the least number of data points was intriguing given the magnitude of difference. Even if Oceania had ten times more data points it would still be the continent with the least data points. A scrupulous observation on your end to document. One slightly confusing aspect of this table is the inclusion of NA without an interpretation to the viewer of what this means. There is also a minor point in having an extra blank column in the table.

You included various different graph types and functions, including filter, select and mutate. Something unique however was that in addition to using transparency, you applied geom_jitter in your graphs to make more visible overlapping or stacking data points. In your final graph you also removed the default grey background of ggplot showing consideration of different aesthetics. I noticed for the final portion of the assignment you also had “### Other notes:” text, which I assume was to create a new section but perhaps had included an extra space. These obviously minor points aside a strong submission.

navysealtf9k commented 7 years ago

HI @Jenncscampbell,

Overall I think you did a good job and I look forward to having an opportunity to review your work again.

Regards