The tip and tail of an airfoil have names, it's the leading edge and trailing edge.
The lift curve slope isn't typically used to see the total change in lift, because typically you have multiple airfoils along a wing. The lift curve slope only applies for one section (unless of course you do in fact have the same airfoil along the entire wing).
Stall can also occur at negative angles of attack.
I wouldn't say that the lift and drag are controlled by equation one. Rather those equations are from the non-dimensionalization of lift and drag, so you can get lift and drag from the coefficients.
Equations doesn't need to be capitalized unless it is at the beginning of a sentence.
In the beginning you mention changing chord and camber, but not thickness or Reynolds number, then that's what you do... and you don't end up changing chord. So... I'd be consistent.
just before table 1 you have an incomplete sentence.
It would be interesting to know why the drag isn't the lowest at alpha=0.
Does increasing alpha ALWAYS increase lift? What about in the stalled region?
Second to last paragraph on page 3, I'm not sure what you meant about plotting on different planes.
Bottom of page 3, which graphs shown in figures 1 and 2?
When you say critical angle of attack, do you mean zero-lift angle of attack? There are multiple "critical" angles of attack. Some people define the any important angle of attack as a critical angle of attack. Other's define stall as the critical angle of attack.
You did such a good job talking about how the Reynolds numb and Camber affect the polars, but then you skimp on the thickness. Did you not have much to say on the thickness?
There seems to be some repetition of comments and thoughts throughout, which isn't entirely bad, but it starts to come off as scattered.
I think it'd be good if you had a little more on the lift curve slope. Feel free to ask me a little more on this.
I have created files for more different real airfoils for a real comparison instead of just doubling the y vectors.