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JohN100x1 / IsekaiMod

An unbalanced gameplay mod for Pathfinder: Wrath of the Righteous
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Typos and incorrect grammar fix #90

Closed JohN100x1 closed 1 year ago

JohN100x1 commented 1 year ago

There are typos and incorrect grammar in the description of some features according to this user.

This is not an exhaustive list (and I could be the one wrong here, as my grammar is far from perfect):

  1. Dual Legacy: ... first[,] ... then 3 years [later,] ... that[,] ... [theives' guild]
  2. Mythic Class Feature: as well[,] didn't you?
  3. Ball of Rage: too close[,] aren't you?
  4. Musical Prodige should be "Prodigy," right?
  5. Dread Lord: Uhm[,] ... As in the [sic] they... blade [looks]
  6. Kinetic Knight: Just like all[,] ... [. After all] ... you willingly [chose] to forego ... and instead [chose] to use...
  7. Kinetic Lord: But you really [love]
  8. Spellblade: Meh[,]
  9. Hero of Light: [smiting] your enemies
  10. Spirit Beacons: [Persons] who[,] [originated] ... Spirit Beacon[,] [have]... (note: used plural form for consistency)
  11. Chimera: [allow] ... [Chimeras are] constantly
  12. Isekai Tactician: tactician [who led]
  13. Supernatural Thief: great power[;] that
kjk001 commented 1 year ago

actually the Prodige one is not a typo, the rest very likely are correct corrections though, as I will be the first to admit that I am terrible when it comes to commas. Also some of the descriptions were not by me but just copied from the suggestion, so I am sharing the blame with Nerion and a few others.

The Prodige one was an easter egg, because it is the french version of the Term Prodigy, and we are talking about a musical hero...