The introduction is well written and descriptive. You clearly state your problem and define specific elements within it. Could have stated preventative measures for the Covid-19 virus along with placing some of the statistics in section two as it got a bit hard to keep up, other than that very well written.
Section two was also well written as it explained preventative measures as well as academic opinion on the subject matter. The prevailing frames that were identified directly correlated with the subject. A critique would be to not start with the definition of models as you did in 2.3, as I would presume that it is assumed knowledge in regards to this assignment, otherwise well written in general and the graph in 2.1 supplements the section nicely.
Section three was generally well written too. Although in sections 3.1 and 3.2 there are no sources for any of the models. The models are well defined, I would suggest providing more examples where the models are used in real-life applications, for example, "An agent-based model has been used previously when modelling the … scenario."
Another little note would be to place references at the end of the document so you can see them all in one place, but overall great pre-submission guys really well done and good luck for the rest of the assignment!
The introduction is well written and descriptive. You clearly state your problem and define specific elements within it. Could have stated preventative measures for the Covid-19 virus along with placing some of the statistics in section two as it got a bit hard to keep up, other than that very well written.
Section two was also well written as it explained preventative measures as well as academic opinion on the subject matter. The prevailing frames that were identified directly correlated with the subject. A critique would be to not start with the definition of models as you did in 2.3, as I would presume that it is assumed knowledge in regards to this assignment, otherwise well written in general and the graph in 2.1 supplements the section nicely.
Section three was generally well written too. Although in sections 3.1 and 3.2 there are no sources for any of the models. The models are well defined, I would suggest providing more examples where the models are used in real-life applications, for example, "An agent-based model has been used previously when modelling the … scenario."
Another little note would be to place references at the end of the document so you can see them all in one place, but overall great pre-submission guys really well done and good luck for the rest of the assignment!