Open utterances-bot opened 1 year ago
Hey Justin. This is some interesting code you have. Much applause for creating the HTML code. Your code respectfully works and is organized in the appropriate manner. However, while it works with no issues, it lacks a certain level of creativity. The different parts of the code doesn't really create a cohesive narrative. Your paragraph and button on top doesn't match at all with the hyperlinks or paragraph on the bottom. The content doesn't mix at all. What I would recommend in the future is making sure your code creates content that adds up together, rather than separate blocks of content with no transitioning whatsoever. Additionally, try to add some creative ingenuity to create engaging and interesting code. In summary, make sure the content your code creates forms a narrative that makes sense and is fun for the user. Other than that, you did great!
Hey there Xavier! Thanks for your interesting take on my code, however I didn't plan adding any narrative to the code whatsoever as this is just a template for future code, it is extremely simple to change the button and links without any difficulty. So I wouldn't worry about, thanks for your helpful take.
Sorry if there was any misinterpretation. I understand you can't necessarily create an entire cohesive narrative with such minimal code, but what I meant is for the two sections/divs in your code to match with the theme you were going. The first section doesn't seem to have any theme at all, while the second was a Chinese based theme. Perhaps you could have made both themes Chinese based.
I like how by looking at the diagram I can see exactly how the html code is organized. However, this page isn't game related at all. I would have liked to see the links lead to some art we could use in the game or maybe a website with game design tips. Other than that, this is very clear and easy-to-understand. Good job!
Basics of HTML Guide | CompSci Blogs
An introduction to basic HTML, and resources to learn more.
https://justinq-dnhs.github.io/student/basics/html