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3 years ago Hallifax is the name of an admiral, which is distinct from the place Halifax. Either way, most of the above have been implemented. Thank you for the typo report.
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El-Daddy
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3 years ago Hallifax is the name of an admiral, which is distinct from the place Halifax. Either way, most of the above have been implemented. Thank you for the typo report.
Quick questions HOI4 version: 1.10.4 Kaiserreich version: 0.16.1
KR_South_Africa_l_english.yml Some common issues: it's != its (it's - it is) then != than have begun a united, a European, etc.
[ ] POLITICS_DANIEL_MALAN_DESC:0 "Daniel François Malan, former editor of the National Party's newspaper, Die Burger, has outmanoeuvred rival James Hertzog to secure dominance of South Africa's nationalist faction. Malan is, even by Afrikaner Nationalist standards, a hard-line proponent of racial segregation and the suppression of South Africa's black population. As State President, Malan strives to transform South Africa into a nation completely by and for the Afrikaner people, and by nearly any means necessary."
, former editor - add an article
[ ] POLITICS_EARL_CLARENDON_DESC:0 "George Herbert Hyde Villiers, the Right Honourable Earl of Clarendon, previously member of the British Government in Exile in Canada, was appointed Governor-General of South Africa in 1931, taking care of His Majesty's duties in South Africa for him: appointing the cabinet and dissolving parliament if need be. Notably, the earl is also the chief scout of South Africa. Despite the fact that his political wit induces respect, some voice concerns over the fact that South Africa's Governor-General is not a South African..."
previously member - add an article
[x] POLITICS_PAT_DUNCAN_DESC:0 "Sir Patrick Duncan was born in Scotland in 1870, in a time quite different from now, when Britain still ruled the world. Having emigrated to South Africa in during the Boer War, after which he practiced as an attorney and then joined politics first as a member of the pro-British Unionist Party and then after the merger the South African Party, Duncan is the first South African citizen to be appointed as Governor-General of the Union. A milestone."
emigrated to South Africa in during the Boer War - remove "in"
after the merger the South African Party - of the SAP
[ ]POLITICS_ERNEST_JANSEN_DESC:0 "Pushed through on the insistence of the National Party, who were determined to get a 'neutral' Governor-General, of course coming from their own ranks, E.G. Jansen. Jansen, an Afrikaner from Natal, is as such the first Afrikaner and first South African born right here in South Africa who administeres His Majesty's duties as South Africa's Head of State."
Administeres - administers
[x] SAF_annex_the_protectorates_desc:0 "It is time to end the Protectorates. After the successful implementation of the Nuweveldt project we can easily bring the territories under our direct control. The British treaties with the natives will be cast aside and the paramount chiefs will be dethroned. The time of a united South Africa is upon us!"
After the successful implementation of the Nuweveldt project we can easily bring - add a comma after "project"
[x] SAF_strengthen_advisory_councils_desc:0 "By strengthening the influence of the advisory councils on policy, we can assure that the interests of the Paramount Chief is at least somewhat balanced with both the European and native interests. It will also lay the groundwork for eventual reform into a bona fide democratic framework in the future."
the interests of the Paramount Chief is - the interests of the Paramount Chief are
[x] SAF_reorganise_the_national_party_desc:0 "Dr. Malan, the pathetic constitutionalist barrister, is allowing our Afrikaner destiny to be held back with this insistence to adhere to the South African constitution, binding us to worthless parliamentary procedures and endangering our nation's hold on power in South Africa in the process. If only a decisive and unrelenting figure could just do away with parliamentarism and the liberals that thrive in it..."
parliamentarism - parlamentarism
[x] SAF_dethrone_the_paramount_chiefs_desc:0 "The Paramount Chiefs represent the kowtowing of the native population to the Imperialist and the corruption it imparts. They must be "dethroned" , with committees formed for greater representation"
remove a space after the word "dethroned"
[x] SAF_implement_apartheid_desc:0 "After a period of consolidation, we are now in a position to strengthen existing segregation laws to bring about full separation of the four South African nations both socially and politically. The Volksraad is behind us and set to carry our governments programme through."
to bring about full separation - probably an article should be used
our governments programme - our government's programme
[x] SAF_flags_amendment_act_desc:0 "It is the result of compromise that South Africa, proud nation as it is, needs to fly the Union Jack, a symbol of oppression by Britain, next to its national flag in official capacity"
Add some articles
[x] SAF_expand_krugerpark_desc:0 "The Krugerpark is a wildlife reserve with its roots in the Sabi Game Reserve of the South African Republic (commonly known as the (boer republic of) Transvaal). In recent years it has attracted a modest amount of tourism from both the English and German spheres of influence who seem enthousiastic about the wildlife rail tours through the national park."
enthousiastic - enthusiastic
[x] SAF_support_cape_wineries_desc:0 "The Mediterranean climate of the Cape is perfect for the cultivation of wine grapes, and as such, South African wine is world-renowned. We should make use of this export boon, and support our wineries in their endeavours."
this export boon - this export boom
[x] SAF_agricultural_innovation_desc:0 "South Africa is a western nation, but also a nation of agriculture. It is only natural that we have are developing a significant edge on agricultural technology compared to other countries, and we can leverage this innovativeness into other fields of Research and Development."
we have are developing - we have been developing
[x] SAF_SOC_post_war_boom_desc:0 "Though blood,sweet and tears, we have secured a level of prosperity in South Africa that would never been reached if the Imperialists or the Nationalist agendas were not removed. We have truly \"broken the chains\"."
Since other typos were addressed, check the "would never been reached" construction, probably should sound like "would've never been reached"
[x] SAF_SOC_repeal_desc:0 "Currently, the South African armed forces is riddled with reforms designed to keep non-whites from ever advancing higher then a non commission officer and that they aren't allowed to order white soldiers, unless permission is given to them by a white Officer. These reforms must be repealed at once."
armed forces is - are
ever advancing - ever-advancing or just advancing
then - than
non commission - noncommission or non-commission
[x] SAF_SOC_abolish_desc:0 "A traditional harking back to days of the Imperialist in the United Kingdom, one could merely buy his way into rank opposed to earning it by merit. The new South African armed forces will no longer have the bourgeoisie buy there way into society, it must be earned through merit and via a vote of ones peers.Though this more of a means for the Government to remove those they deem a threat to the cause."
there way - their way
peers.Though - add a space
[x] SAF_SOC_self_desc:0 "With the recent development of "English" arms within South Africa, it has become apparent that South Africa is the lone syndicalist outpost in Africa and needs to maintain a level of self reliance regarding it's arm industry. With this unions have been formed to establish it's own local arms industries to produce the means of war."
self reliance - self-reliance
it's arm industry - its arms industry
it's own local - its own local
[x] SAF_SOC_navy_esb_desc:0 "With the help of British Navy advisors, the South African navy has began the process of reforming itself into a model more befitting a member of the Third Internationale."
began - begun
[x] SAF_SOC_navy_des_desc:0 "With the latest Destroyer designs now made available to the South African Navy from the Union of Britian, has allowed them to standardise itself to that of the Third Internationale."
Britian - Britain
[x] SAF_SOC_navy_mf_desc:0 "With South Africa still attempting to establish the means to produce and become more self-reliant, a merchant navy has become required to ensure that goods, weapons and other necessities can shipped into the country."
can shipped - can be shipped
[x] SAF_SOC_navy_cru_desc:0 "Further efforts have been made to obtain larger ship designs for the South African Navy. These cruiser designs that will fill in the niche that the Navy requires to provide greater protection of South Africa's shores."
These cruiser designs that will fill - These cruiser designs will fill
[x] SAF_SOC_cof_officer_desc:0 "The Camarades have began to retrain our newly voted-in Officer Corps in the tactics of "Guerre de Mouvement" - War of Movement. This involves the promotion of using armoured units to breakthrough the enemy lines and exploit the enemies flanks. Perfect warfare, it appears, for the large desert of North Africa."
have began - have begun
[x] SAF_SOC_cof_para_desc:0 "The \"Parabat\", the combining of the words "Parachute Battalion" is a local initiative to have infantry dropped behind enemy lines and strike the enemies rear. Further to this, the aims of the battalion is to supply syndicalist-aligned forces within Africa to further the cause."
the aims of the battalion is to supply - the aim of the battalion is to supply
[x] SAF_SOC_cof_tank_desc:0 "Tank designs from the Commune of France have been adapted by our local engineers to ensure they can survive the rigorous terrain that our homeland brings. Though this has come at some cost, it's benefits outweigh this greatly and will surely continue return itself in investment."
it's benefits - its benefits
will surely continue return itself - "to return" probably? Sounds odd
[x] SAF_SOC_sri_cas_desc:0 "The terrain of South Africa is vast and varied, with desert, bush and lush overgrowth being but a few of the terrain types within it's borders. With the introduction of new Close Air Support models from the Third Internationale, has allowed for our air force to provide greater ground support to our ground forces."
within it's borders - within its borders
With the introduction of new Close Air Support models from the Third Internationale, has allowed for our air force... - The introduction of new Close Air Support models from the Third Internationale has allowed for our air force...
[x] SAF_SOC_research_desc:0 "The South African armed forces can not overly relay on research and development from the Third Internationale. It must be able to take it's own measure in these fields and promote the development of these fields."
relay - rely
take it's own - take its own
[x] SAF_SOC_uob_red_guard_desc:0 "Red Guard units have been designed to be made of veterans within the South African army and those more 'dedicated' to syndicalism. They are provided better equipment and training compared to their Militia brethren. Though in theory, Militia formations can be 'promoted' to a Red Guard formation, though this appears to be more political based then merit..."
appears to be more political based then merit... - appears to be more political based than merit...
[x] SAF_SOC_uob_marine_desc:0 "R.E.D advisors have provided the training and means for a South African marine force to be created. The concept of this formation is to secure beach heads and hold them long enough for larger Militia and Red Guard units to punch through. With Africa and even Europe dotted with important ports, these marines will proof vital in the war too come."
will proof vital - will prove vital
the war too come - the war to come
[x] SAF_SOC_NCO_Brit:0 "British Non-Commisioned Officer Training Complete"
Non-Commisioned- Non-Commissioned
[x] SAF_SOC_purge_idea_1_desc:0 "Elements within the South African armed forces must be purged if the nation is to break it's chains completely"
to break it's chains - to break its chains
[x] SAF_THRIDINTREFORM_DES_desc:0 "The South African Armed Forces have become nothing more of a rag tag bunch of syndicalist Militiamen and syndicalist army sympathizers. The Government seeing this, has requested for the advisors from the Third Internationale to assist them reforming the South African Armed Forces and installing syndicalist ideals amongst it's rank file."
The Government seeing this, - probably " The Government, seeing this,"
amongst it's rank - amongst its rank
[x] SAF_S1_B1_desc:0 "With the arrival of the British Advisors to our shores, they have began to survey our rag tag Army"
they have began - they have begun
[x] SAF_S2_B2_desc:0 "British Advisors have conducted their survey and have come forward with their assessment being in short, grim. With our armed forces being mainly made up of a rag tag militia, the British Advisors have their work cut out for them. Opting to setup their base of operations in the Western Cape, which many have seen as an effort to 'raise the red flag' in an area still not friendly to syndicalism, the British Advisor set upon their task."
Opting to setup their base - Opting to set up their base
[x] SAF_S4_B4_desc:0 "The "Revolutionary Academy" has been setup by the British to ensure that syndicalist teachings are embraced by all members of the South African armed forces. This has also been a means to allow those, who under the previous Imperialist regime were not afforded the privilege of an education making indoctrination even more attractive."
The "Revolutionary Academy" has been setup - The "Revolutionary Academy" has been set up (noun-verb)
This has also been a means to allow those, who under the previous Imperialist regime were not afforded the privilege of an education making indoctrination even more attractive - add a comma (...were not afforded the privilege of an education, making indoctrination even more attractive)
[x] SAF_S5_B5_desc:0 "With the racist reforms and policies long removed, the training and promoting of non-white NCO's is needed if the South African Army is to move forward and break it's Imperialist chains.
it's Imperialist chains - its Imperialist chains
[x] SAF_S6_B6_desc:0 "Though the syndicalist revolution has brought an unparalleled levels of equality..."
an unparalleled levels - either remove article or change it to "an unparalleled level"
[x] SAF_S7_B7_desc:0 "Though the British revolution removed much of the old imperialist traditions, the idea that "Britain rules the waves" is still very much alive within Navy of the Union of Britain. This has brought South Africa an opportunity to have British marine specialist to train their forces in amphibious warfare."
within Navy - within the Navy
to have British marine specialist - singular? If true, add an article
[x] SAF_S1_F2_desc:0 "The French have "Suggested" that the forceful dissolution of the syndicalist militia units to ensure that their is no counter-revolution movement and have happily offered their assistance in doing so."
that their is no - that there is no
[x] SAF_S1_F6_desc:0 "The concept of airborne infantry has been around since the Weltkrieg, now with French ingenuity, South Africa is able to obtain a small fleed of cargo planes to help to establish it's first Airborne Infantry division"
a small fleed of cargo planes - a small fleet of cargo planes
[x] SFR_federal_elections_desc:0 "The system in which we de-facto handed political power in South Africa to the Afrikaners on the basis that they were the majority of South Africans with a white skin has terribly backfired, but this does not mean the concept of democracy has lost meaning..."
with a white skin - remove an article (uncountable noun)
[ ] SFR_peace_and_prosperity_desc:0 "The era of struggle between the British and Afrikaner races is finally put to an end. From the ashes has arisen a more united South Africa under a federal system, in which each province, now state, can handle its own affairs. Afrikaner and Englishman alike shall march in peace to a new nationhood."
The era of struggle - add an article
to a new nationhood - remove an article (uncountable noun)
[x] SAF_Smuts_Ref_desc:0 "Jan Smuts' reforms are simple enough in theory, though complex in practice. Jan wishes to centralise the Army further to ensure a fluid command and control is emplace. Other reforms also include the allowance of non-white into the military, including combat roles. This has caused an uproar in many parts of country and Jan will have to proceed carefully if he doesn't wish to upset the apple-cart too much."
control is emplace - emplace is a verb, so maybe "emplaced" or use other words
[x] SAF_Cape_Corp_desc:0 "The Cape Corps is the first 'coloured' unit to be formed in South Africa, having it's history stretch all the way back to 1781 with the 'Corps Bastaard Hottentoten' - Corps of Bastards Hottentot..."
having it's history stretch - having its history stretch
[x] SAF_coastal_corp_desc:0 "With South Africa having several ports that are deemed vital for both trade and supply, the establishment of the Coast Defence Corps has been approved, with the goal to have those not suitable for front-line duty to man it's ports."
to man it's ports - to man its ports
[x] SAF_Modern_Artillery_desc:0 "The South African Army currently has artillery pieces that would best be displayed in war museum opposed to a modern battlefield.
displayed in war museum - add an article
[x] SAF_Pirow_Mech_desc:0 "Motorisation of the armed forces has been slow, but an inherit problem on relying on thin skinned vehicles is the lack of protection they provide. To overcome this, the repurposing of older tanks to carry our troops into the front."
inherit (verb, become heir to) - inherent (essential, built-in)
[ ] SAF_Pirow_Hit_desc:0 "The enemy must be harried relentlessly, with concentrated attacks designed to draw out the enemy in one location for our forces to strike at another. This was a proven tactic used by the Boer kommandos and further refined by our armed forces."
the Boer kommandos - the Boer commandos
[x] SAF_idea_reactionary_activities_desc:0 "...Unfortunately, the narrow education standards of the previous regime means their expertise is nowhere to be found among loyalists."
the narrow education standards of the previous regime means - the narrow education standards of the previous regime mean
[x] SAF_army_stipends_desc:0 "With the increase of your average soldiers pay, more men have began to join the army swelling South Africa's manpower"
have began - have begun
[x] SAF_army_call_desc:0 "The rallying call for recruits has began with thousands beginning to flock under the banner of the South African armed forces"
has began - has begun
[x] SAF_army_focus_desc:0 "The Savannah has provided challenges to the South African Army, which resulted in an unique logistic support."
an unique - a unique (although the word "unique" begins with a vowel letter what really counts is that it begins with a consonant sound (yu), which is what determines between using the articles A or AN)
[x] SAF_army_3pir_desc:0 "Each Kommando unit has it's own take on training and tactics, with great effort, this has been centralised and formalised to allow cohesion amongst these units"
unit has it's own take - unit has its own take
[x] SAF_eviron_idea_desc:0 "With focus on training within the harsh Savanna, South African soldiers have become better adjusted to dealing with hotter climates"
With focus - add an article
[x] SAF_Halifax_Navy_desc:0 "With Hallifax at the helm, the South African Navy has recieved grants and Canadian expertise in order to expand it's role in defending the Cape"
Hallifax - Halifax
recieved - received
expand it's role - expand its role
[x] SAF_Dutch_Love_desc:0 "The idea of using Tactical Bombers to provide close air support is an initiative of Dutch design. Though South Africans are yet to still master this, these tactics will proof invaluable in the war to come"
will proof- will prove
[x] SAF_GER_Navy_Advisors_1_desc:0 "With the mindset of 'Quality of Quantity', the South African Navy is being equipped to fight with the best that there is too offer, regardless the price"
the best that there is too offer - the best that there is to offer
regardless the price - regardless of the price
[x] SAF_No_Euro_War_desc:0 "South Africa not wishing to completely dedicate it's armed forces to a "European War" has chosen to defend it's shores and provide limited support to it's allies"
it's armed forces - its armed forces
it's shores - its shores
it's allies - its allies
[x] SAF_decision_township_modernisation_desc:0 "With previous restrictions on the movement of black South Africans to the our cities lifted, the townships surrounding these cities have grown increasingly overpopulated, overwhelming the local governments and causing living conditions in these townships to be poor. Solving this problem will require a large-scale housing program."
to the our cities lifted - to our cities lifted
[x] SAF_intervene_mozambique_desc:0 "The former Portuguese colony of Mozambique has never been part of the British Empire. However, south of the Zambezi river it is part of Jan Smuts' designs for a greater South African dominion..."
the Zambezi river - the Zambezi River
[x] SAF_Mil_Army_1_desc:0 "The concept of a colour NCO is not a new one for South Africa. There are several challenges though still facing this rank being that most white men refuse to take orders from native NCO's unless ordered to by a white officer and most aren't trusted by their own native enlisted men. With these aside their uses outweighs their cons as it allows for for the communication of commands quickly and efficiently on the battlefield."
With these aside their uses outweighs their cons - With these aside, their uses outweigh their cons
as it allows for for the communication - as it allows for the communication
[x] SAF_Mil_Army_4_desc:0 "The term "coloured" in South Africa refers to a person of mix race and does cause confusion for South African race classification. This aside, they are generally more 'accepted' then other minorities in South Africa, though usually formed in their own units."
a person of mix race - a person of mixed race
more 'accepted' then other minorities - more 'accepted' than other minorities
[x] SAF_Mil_Army_7_desc:0 "South Africa industry is still in it's infancy and still being reshaped and reformed by the Government. With this in mind the need to procure Canadian arms is a must, with Smuts also looking to secure tanks for his newly conceived Armoured Corps"
in it's infancy - in its infancy
With this in mind the need to procure - With this in mind, the need to procure
[x] SAF_Pirow_Military_Fact_desc:0 "Out of the blue, Oswald Pirow has announced his plans to travel to Germany on a military facts finding mission. This goes completely against the grain and has even caused some of his most steadfast allies to question this action. To his detractors he has said, \"I don't see the the issue of wishing to gain insight on how the winners of the Weltkrieg won\""
"I don't see the the issue of wishing - "I don't see the issue of wishing
[x] SAF_Can_Aid_desc:0 "With London being strangled by the tentacles of syndicalism, Ottawa has picked up the torch to to lead the Entente into the heart of the red beast. The South African Government has opened it's doors to Canadian Advisors, to expand it's Air Force and fledging Navy, with the goal of supporting Canada in the great crusade against the syndicalists. Though the Afrikaners aren't impressed with this notion..."
Ottawa has picked up the torch to to lead the Entente - Ottawa has picked up the torch to lead the Entente
it's doors - its doors
it's Air Force - its Air Force
[x] SAF_Imperial_Gift_desc:0 "Dubbed the 'Imperial Gift' by South African Air Force personnel with Canada providing a more then modest contribution to our lacklustre air force by providing several squadrons worth of aeroplanes, along with parts and munitions."
then - than
[x] SAF_Plane_Fact_desc:0 "Though Canada is more then able to supply South Africa, the perils of war means that this may not always be a contributing factor. South Africa must be able to provide a small level of dependence with parts and munitions for their Air Force."
more then able - more than able
the perils of war means - the perils of war mean
[x] SAF_SAAF_desc:0 "The South African Air Force before the support from Canada and other Entente forces was nothing more then a few biplanes from a forgotten era and some "acquired" German Junkers. Now with the latest training and aircraft, the now dubbed Royal South African Air Force, is ready to cry havoc and let slip."
nothing more then a few biplanes - nothing more than a few biplanes
[ ] SAF_Recall_Halifax:0 "Hallifax at the Helm"
Hallifax - Halifax
[ ] SAF_Recall_Halifax_desc:0 "Hallifax, once a retired Admiral of the British fleet has now been requested to take the helm in the reforms required for South Africa to establish its own navy."
Hallifax- Halifax
[x] SAF_Con_Navy_desc:0 "With the Entente nations contacted via a vast array of overlapping trade routes, the need for a merchant fleet is needed more then ever."
more then ever - more than ever
[ ] SAF_Royal_Navy_desc:0 "With Hallifax at the helm, the South African naval branches and been centralised allowing for South Africa to officially have a navy. Though smaller, its main goals are to protect shipping lanes within the Cape and provide limited support to the Canadian war effort."
With Hallifax at the helm - With Halifax at the helm
[x] SAF_Can_Develop_Naval_desc:0 "Several of our ports and docks have seen better days, with many not having been in service since the Weltkrieg. With Canadian investment and 'know how', we have began to overhaul these docks to better assist our Entente allies."
we have began - we have begun
[x] SAF_Dutch_Connection_desc:0 "Through some extraordinary use of back channels and "meetings", Pirow has been in contact with several Dutch aviation experts, who will assist South Africa in reforming it's Air Force, with further talks looking promising regarding the purchasing of Dutch aircraft."
it's Air Force - its Air Force
[x] SAF_Dutch_Aircraft_desc:0 "South African has been able to obtain several Dutch designed Fokker fighters via it's new connections. Though limited in numbers, the licence for these aircraft have been secured, though through what means are best left unsaid."
Dutch designed - Dutch-designed
via it's new connections - via its new connections
[x] SAF_Dutch_Training_desc:0 "From our contacts in Mittelafrika, we have been able to obtain "Flüssigkeitsbrandbombe", Liquid Fire Bomb. It contains White Phosphorus, which is effective against enemies who think the thick dense jungle will save them, though the after effects of the weapon are less then desired.."
are less then desired - are less than desired
[x] SAF_SALM_desc:0 "The South African Air Force now renamed by to it's Afrikaans name of "Suid-Afrikaanse Lugmag", SALM, is now a force to be reckoned with. With the next batch of South African pilots now taking to the skies of the savannah, the SALM is ready to face the challenges that looms over the horizon."
by to it's Afrikaans name - by to its Afrikaans name
the challenges that looms - the challenges that loom
[x] SAF_GER_Mil_Invest_desc:0 "Similar to Canada, Germany to has it's interest in South Africa, with it wishing to expand the infrastructure between the Cape and it's colonies in Africa. Though only minor in nature, it appears the real reason is to allow for further German investment in South Africa lucrative mining sector."
Germany to has it's interest in South Africa - Germany has its interest in South Africa
it's colonies in Africa - its colonies in Africa
[x] SAF_GER_AAA_desc:0 "South Africa is to become Germany's most southern listening post. These installations will better monitor Naval and Air traffic in the Cape and also provide South Africa with a level of early warning needed for it's forces to react to a potential threat."
for it's forces - for its forces
[x] SAF_GER_Naval_Lessons_desc:0 "The Second Battle of Jutland for the Kaiserliche showed that being on the bleeding edge of technology is a must. With this in mind, South Africa must have the mindset of "Quality of Quantity" in it's construction of it's Navy."
in it's construction of it's Navy - in its construction of its Navy
[x] SAF_GER_Navy_desc:0 "Taking a page from the South African Air Force 'Rebranding' the use of Afrikaans over English for the naming of the newly formed Navy. This action has been taken to move it away from it's 'English' beginnings."
it's 'English' beginnings - its 'English' beginnings
[x] SAF_War_Policy_desc:0 "With the both Air and Naval branches of the South African Armed forces receiving the much needed reforms they needed, it's time for South Africa to decide on whether it will defend it's own shores or support those in Europe."
it's own shores - its own shores
[x] SAF_Anti_Syndie_desc:0 "Though an "European" war is never popular in South Africa,it's a harsh reality that if syndicalism were to prevail in Europe, then in Africa, South Africa would surely be next. We must assist in slaying the Red Beast, before it it's tentacles make it to our shores..."
an "European" war - a "European" war
South Africa,it's a harsh reality - South Africa, it's a harsh reality
We must assist in slaying the Red Beast, before it it's tentacles make it to our shores - We must assist in slaying the Red Beast before its tentacles make it to our shores
[x] saf.1.d:0 "Formed in 1910 as a merger of the various British possessions in South Africa - the Cape Colony, Natal, Transvaal, and the Orange Free State - after the second Boer war, the Union of South Africa remains as the last remnant of British presence in Africa.\n\nBut the dominion is wavering: the white Afrikaner population yearns back to the independence of the Boer republics of old, while on the other side of the political spectrum syndicalism, already influential in the region since before the Commune of France or the Union of Britain materialized, is creeping into the minds of the impoverished underclass, of every racial group, who are chafing under the effects of the economic downturn.\n\nThe Union's politics revolve around a two party system: the South African Party of general Jan Smuts, and the National Party of general J.B.M. Hertzog. A smaller party, the Labour Party, currently divided in two opposing factions, also holds a presence in the South African Parliament..."
after the second Boer war - after the Second Boer War
remnant of British presence - remnant of the British presence
The Union's politics revolve around a two party system - The Union's politics revolves around a two-party system
general Jan Smuts - General Jan Smuts
Labour Party, currently divided in two opposing factions - Labour Party, currently divided into two opposing faction (except for such phrases as divide in half and divide in two, the preposition into is used)
[ ] saf.3.d:0 "...The Smuts-Roos government that came into power in 1929 kept these arrangement in place, and as such, the woes of Black Monday did not skip South Africa.\n\nThe crisis has had a terrible effect upon the South African economy, unemployment has risen markedly as many companies that depended upon the German export market have gone out of business or laid off white workers in favour of cheaper native labour."
kept these arrangement in place - "kept these arrangements in place" or "kept this arrangement in place"
[ ] saf.20.d:0 "Unsurprisingly, word about our less-than-worker-friendly response to Black Monday has quickly spread to socialist circles...."
Unsurprisingly, word about - add an article
[x] saf.22.d:0 "After two months of strike, it has been the strikers who blinked first...."
After two months of strike - add an article
[x] saf.23.d:0 "Of all Britain's dominions, the Union of South Africa has maintained the closest relations with Germany and following the dawn of the great depression in 1925, the Afrikaner Nationalist government of South Africa has closed several extensive trade deals with Germany in an attempt to stifle the recession. It is no surprise then, that now, while the entente as a whole is slowly recovering from the Great Depression, South Africa is now suffers under the effects of the recession that comes forth from the British Empire..."
South Africa is now suffers - South Africa suffers/is suffering
[ ] saf.37.d.fusion:0 "...\n\nJan Smuts and his United Party wing are sceptical about this proposed intervention in the Cape and Southern Rhodesia qualified franchise, but Smuts has accepted that this act will be law on the condition that we will swiftly raise the amount of land designated to the natives from the current 8% to 13%, which he views as a fair trade and more worthwhile to the natives than the right of a small elite voting in the general elections...."
this act will be law - add an article
he views as a fair trade - he views as fair trade (uncountable noun)
[x] saf.38.d:0 "In the last few years, an extremist wing of radical Nationalists has grown within the National Party. This wing rejects basic principles like parliamentarism and is not afraid to use violence to achieve their goals...:"
parliamentarism - parlamentarism
[x] saf.49.d:0 "Following the Smuts government's failure to pass the 'Coloured' Enfranchisement Act, the Governor-General has decided to dissolve the Volksraad and to write out new elections. Unsurprisingly, the National Party took the opportunity campaign on a 'swart gevaar' gevaar platform - black danger: the proposed security threat the native population would pose to South Africa's white population..."
he National Party took the opportunity campaign - the National Party took the opportunity to campaign
on a 'swart gevaar' gevaar platform - maybe just "on a 'swart gevaar' platform"?
[x] saf.50.d:0 "In response to election of Malan's National Party and their radical republican platform, the provincial governor..."
In response to election - add an article
[ ] saf.51.d:0 "...The State President appoints the cabinet - now to be called the president's council - and can be removed by parliament for misconduct or incapacity following investigation by a joint committee..."
following investigation - add an article
[ ] saf.52.d:0 "...The white settler population was not consulted in this decision, despite having clearly rejected the prospect of union in the elections for the advisory council in 1919. .."
the prospect of union - add an article
[x] saf.62.t:0 "Treaty of Damawe"
Change to Dimawe (saf.62.d.normal:0 "...to sign away all our claims to Bechuanaland, at the border town of Dimawe...")
[x] saf.63.t:0 "Treaty of Damawe"
Change to Dimawe (saf.62.d.normal:0 "...to sign away all our claims to Bechuanaland, at the border town of Dimawe...")
[x] saf.70.d:0 "The news of the reunion between the South African Party and the United Party has shook South African politics to its core..."
has shook - has shaken
[x] saf.79.d:0 "...the ox-wagons of the re-enactment will be passing through numerous small towns and larger cities where Afrikaners in classic voortrekker clothing..."
voortrekker - Voortrekker
[x] saf.82.d:0 "In response Klopper has refused to use the new oxen provided by the city and made a statement by pulling the wagons through the city by hand. At the same time, torches were revealed by young participants of the Trek, which had apparently been kept alight since the parade left Cape Town.\n\nThe rest of the month will be dedicated to the trek to site of the battle of Vegkop, near the town of Heilbron."
In response Klopper has refused - In response, Klopper has refused
to site - add an article
[x] saf.84.d:0 "...Despite the fact that Johannesburg too, is an English city, the crowd is large, although it will likely dwarfed by the receiving crowd in Pretoria three days from now...."
it will likely dwarfed - it will likely be dwarfed
[x] saf.85.d:0 "...the descendant of a British settler who gave one of the first voortrekkers a bible was shouted down for reciting the English greeting of his ancestor in this play..."
voortrekkers - Voortrekkers
[x] saf.86.d:0 "...the descendant of a British settler who gave one of the first voortrekkers a bible was shouted down for reciting the English greeting of his ancestor..."
voortrekkers - Voortrekkers
[x] saf.88.d:0 "...This turn of event has torn put a heavy burden on the Fusion government, because generals Hertzog and Smuts disagree on South Africa's role in this conflict. While neither has much love for syndicalism, Hertzog believes that no South Africans should die in what is strictly an European conflict, and that unreservedly joining the side of the British would hurt Afrikaner-British relations here in South Africa."
This turn of event - This turn of events
an European conflict - a European conflict
[x] saf.89.d:0 "After losing the vote in the cabinet, Hertzog insisted that the matter be put to a vote in the Volksraad instead. Speaking to a overflowing Volksraad..:
a overflowing - an overflowing
[x] saf.92.d:0 "With control of the United Party having been wretched from his grasp by Jan Smuts..."
wretched (unhappy) - wrenched (pull out)
[x] saf.98.d:0 "...While the earl has been doing a fine job fulfilling the king's duty in South Africa, voices have arisen who claim it is high time that a South African citizen would fulfil this prestigious post, instead of a exile civil servant. ..."
a exile - an exile
[x] saf.100.d:0 "...While the South African Labour Party has remained apart from the ISL due to its more progressive stance on race relations more radical members push for a reconciliation. In the meanwhile, the ISL and it's affiliates in the ICU campaign for political reform in South Africa and organise resistance to the worst excesses Von Göring commits against the native population in Mittelafrika."
push for a reconciliation - push for reconciliation (uncountable noun)
it's affiliates - its affiliates
[x] saf.101.d:0 "The International Socialist League has completely condemned our governments racial policies and have united with other native rights groups to oppose us..."
our governments racial policies - our government's racial policies
League have united - has united
[x] saf.103.d:0 "Following the Population Registration Act, a series of laws came into force, collectively refereed to as 'petty' Apartheid, as opposed to the 'greater' Apartheid planned by the Nationalist government..."
refereed - referred
[x] saf.108.d:0 "...On the other hand are the ICU, who have elected to be led by the newly arrived Clements Kadalie. They want to immediately implement a system of ethnic federalism, giving a degree of autonomy to each ethnic group under a unified multiracial state.\n\nAs a compromise between the whites who fear swamping by the larger amount of natives, the decisions will be made by a half on half split group of representatives of both organisations."
On the other hand are the ICU, who have elected - On the other hand is the ICU, that/which has elected
They want to - It wants to
by a half on half split group - by half-split group
[x] saf.112.d:0 "The Johannesburg Convention has closed and a constitution has been approved. Elections have been held on the grounds of the decisions made and it was clear that the ISL managed to concentrate a large amount of power to themselves..:
concentrate to themselves - concentrate on themselves
[x] saf.115.d:0 "The newly appointed chairman of the Industrial and Commercial Worker's Union, the Africanist James 'Jimmy' La Guma, has denounced the ISL government. According to him, our new socialist government is functionally little different from the old regime..."
is functionally little different - is functionally a little different
[ ] saf.116.d:0 "In Pretoria, David Ivon Jones and the rest of the cabinet have been arrested by these forces.\n\nIn the morning, South Africa was addressed by radio by La Guma, who declared himself the new Chairman of [SAF.GetNameDef]. The faux-socialist regime of the white ruling class has been overthrown, and the true, black, proletariat would finally rise to power after so many years of oppression. The chains were broken, South Africa awaits a new dawn."
have been arrested - has been arrested
South Africa awaits a new dawn - South Africa awaits new dawn (uncountable noun)
[x] saf.119.d:0 "is considered by many the worst possible outcome, causing a second wave of emigration possibly even more severe than the first one by a segment of white South Africans who stayed at first, depriving South Africa yet again of valuable expertise and curtailing our economic output once again."
a second wave - the second wave
[x] saf.122.d:0 "...Later in the day church gatherings were organised, where the story of the voortrekkers vow to God was recounted. In some families, the day was closed with a traditional South African barbeque, the so-called 'braai'."
the voortrekkers vow - the Voortrekker's vow/the Voortrekkers vows
[x] saf.141.d:0 "The government's stance on race relations have been the deciding factor in most South African elections, and certainly every election in the last decade. As such, the government is strongly considering appointing an independent commission to re-evaluate our laws with regards to the native South Africans. This commission shall then investigate the situation and on that basis bring out an advice on how to proceed..."
stance on race relations have been - stance on race relations has been
bring out an advice - bring out advice (uncountable noun)
[x] saf.142.a:0 "We shall take this in consideration..."
in consideration - into consideration
[x] saf.148.d:0 "Disturbing news from the coal mining town of Ermelo in the Transvaal has arrived. A group of armed Zulu men have attacked the local bank and taken away into the Drakensberg mountains with what were supposed to be the wages of the miners ... Despite their best intentions, the police has been unable to track them down."
A group of armed Zulu men have attacked - A group of armed Zulu men has attacked
the police has been unable - the police have been unable (plural subject)
[x] saf.150.d:0 "Excellent news! Our estimation that the Regiment of the Stone gang would attempt to free their former leader, Nongoloza, was correct. If the South African Police would not have been their to assist the prison wardens..."
their - there
[x] saf.152.d:0 "Instead they stayed in the vicinity of Nelspruit and struck Barberton Prison, where the wardens were, under pressure of the overwhelming force of the gang, left with little choice but to hand Nongoloza over..."
under pressure - under the pressure
[x] saf.169.d:0 "In the township of Orlando in Johannesburg a group of migrant workers have founded a club to periodically practice the sport of football.."
a group of migrant workers have founded - a group of migrant workers has founded
[x] saf.171.d:0 "...The group, comprised of both black intellectuals and tribal chiefs, has stagnated however during the twenties, with the Industrial Commercial Workers’ Union (ICU) taking over its prominence as the foremost native rights activists. Since then, the ANC had been working to create an united front with Indians and Coloureds..."
Industrial Commercial Workers’ Union - Industrial Commercial Workers Union
create an united front - create a united front
[ ] saf.172.d:0 "...The Act significantly increases funding for non-white education to close this gap, and makes provisions to help non-whites to fulfil the requirements to enrol in university."
in university - add an article (a or the)
[x] saf.177.d:0 "...It also gives the state the express permission to censor those ‘burgers’ and organisations who endanger public order or the good morale of the republic...."
who endanger - that endanger
[x] saf.178.d:0 "Now that Bechuanaland has been opened to white settlement, their ‘Kaptein’ (equivalent of chief) Albert Mouton has petitioned the prime minister for the establishment of a ‘Nuwe Roheboth’ in Bechuanaland,..."
equivalent of chief - add articles
[x] saf.179.d:0 "The gigantic German colony in central Africa, stretching a continuous stretch of land from the Ivory Coast to Zanzibar, has collapsed in on itself. What was once the pride of the German nation has transformed in possibly the largest anarchy and violence the world has ever seen..."
transformed in possibly the largest anarchy and violence - transformed into possibly the largest anarchy and violence
[x] saf.186.d:0 "Following our crossing of the border closely, the Germans have scrambled to secure the Northern part of Mozambique, which is the furthest away from our own country. Now the de-facto border splits Mozambique in half, following the Zambezi river.
the Zambezi river - the Zambezi River
[x] saf.200.d:0 "What originally began as a trivial endeavour to obtain arms from Canada has blown out completely. It appears that those aligned with the National Party have protested in the deal with Canada is foolish and will only serve to draw South Africa closer into Canada's affairs. The more extreme members of the party have stated that German rifles should be sorted and Mittelafrika is a more obvious choice due to it's proximity to South Africa with this last statement causing a further resentment between the pro British and Afrikaner diaspora in South Africa.\n\nRegardless of the wishes of those 'few', the Government has still sort to procure a Canadian rifle contract to replacing the army's ageing arsenal."
it's proximity - its proximity
causing a further resentment - causing further resentment
pro British - pro-British
contract to replacing - contract to replace
[x] saf.220.d:0 "Dubbed "Oswald Pirow's Five Year Plan" purely because of his desire to push it other Smuts' plans. The plan itself consist of several points, highlighting the need for South Africa to be able to suppress an internal unrest, the militarisation of South Africa's White youth (though it appears to be more Afrikaner inclined), protection against foreign threats (mainly pegged towards syndicalism), and it's role in a European War.
an internal unrest - internal unrest (uncountable noun)
and it's role - and its role
[x] saf.221.d:0 "...It appears the Oswald has met with some peculiar characters within German political circles, and has been seen with more then several DVLP (Deutsche Vaterlandspartei) party members..."
with more then several DVLP (Deutsche Vaterlandspartei) party members - with more than several DVLP (Deutsche Vaterlandspartei) party members
[x] saf.2211.d:0 "Oswald's plans to fly to Germany for a fact finding mission has turned into a national joke.
plans has turned - have turned
[x] saf.222.d:0 "South Africa is needing to be more and more self-reliant due to its unique position on the globe. With the military wishing to motorise and mechanise it's formations..."
it's formations - its formations
[x] saf.225.d:0 "With German and to an extent Dutch advisors assisting South Africa in it's reforms of the last piece of Pirow's military puzzle is to decide whether South Africa dedicate some of it's forces to Europe, or commit to it completely.
it's reforms - its reforms
it's forces - its forces
[x] saf.241.d:0 "With the government opting to back the "Devil it knows", British advisors have begun to arrive in Cape Town. These 'Red Beret'-wearing men and women have caused somewhat of a sensation within Cape Town as many thought the British would be sending soldiers, who would be marching in rank and file as they have done in the past, but instead has send a mainly civilian contingent. Regardless of this low-key arrival, the British advisors have began their work, with their first task being the surveying of the South African Army as part of the first steps of their planned reform."
has send a mainly civilian contingent - has sent a mainly civilian contingent
advisors have began their work - advisors have begun their work
[x] saf.242.d:0 "The British survey, which many thought would take months, has taken little more then two weeks to complete. .."
little more then two weeks - little more than two weeks
[x] saf.307.d:0 "...However, in january the representative, sir Raleigh Grey, passed away, necessitating a by-election..."
january - January
[x] saf.318.d_normal:0 "... If they lose it, it could be bad sign for next year."
could be bad sign - could be a bad sign
[x] #saf.92.d.notfederation:0, #saf.92.d.governor:0:
at family farm - add an article
He could not prevent the country moving away from the Empire - He could not prevent the country from moving away from the Empire