[x] ZIM_idea_responsible_government_desc:0 "The white settler population had been lobbying for local responsible government for years, but the British South Africa Company, South Africa and Great Britain favoured integration into South Africa instead and forced the colony to integrate into South Africa as a province. But now, responsible government has finally been achieved, probably in a more extensive form than it would have ever been if it had been granted in 1922."
But now, responsible government - add an article
[x] ZIM_ECO_4_desc:0 "With a small boom in beef export, the South Rhodesia economy has began to stabilize"
has began - has begun
[x] ZIM_North_Int_desc:0 "Dubbed the Northern Initiative, Rhodesia wishes it to see it self as the bastion of British settlement in Africa. Though convincing others of this is going to a different story."
to see it self - to see itself
[x] ZIM_college_1_desc:0 "With expanding it's grounds, the government hopes the college becomes the think tank of Africa"
With expanding it's grounds - With expanding its grounds
[x] ZIM_sub_ult_eco_2_desc:0 "Further subsidies within the utility sector has lead to a small boom in the sector"
subsidies has lead - have lead
[x] ZIM_motorised_doctrine_idea_desc:0 "The concept of mobile warfare has been embraced by the Rhodesian High Command allowing for quick deployment of troops to supplement it's more elite formations"
it's more elite formations - its more elite formations
[x] ZIM_sf_1_desc:0 "Facing the problems of limited manpower, the Rhodesian armed forces has adopted the tactics of the Beor Kommando"
armed forces has adopted - armed forces have adopted (plural noun)
[x] ZIM_sf_2_desc_desc:0 "With the creation of the Selous Scouts unit, the Rhodesia truly now has a special forces to call it's own"
has a special forces - has special forces (plural noun)
to call it's own - to call its own
[x] ZIM_establish_gonarezhou_game_reserve_desc:0 "The Gonarezhou is vast and filled with beautiful wildlife, and we must keep it this way. We should consider declaring it a national reserve in order to better protect it's natural state."
it's natural state - its natural state
[x] ZIM_draft_constitution_desc:0 "A constitution will provide us with stability and certainty of future governance. It is of the utmost priority that a constitution for Southern Rhodesia be drafted."
be drafted - probably "is drafted"
[x] ZIM_cross_zambezi_desc:0 "Across the Zambezi lays North Rhodesia, taken from the British after the collapse of their empire, we have yet to be under the same flag. However, opportunity may just allow us to take back what is rightfully ours."
opportunity - add an article
[x] ZIM_industrial_conciliation_act_desc:0 "The Industrial Conciliation Act borrows heavily from it's South African counterpart with it's end goal to protect the interest of white workers over their black counterparts."
from it's South African counterpart - from its South African counterpart
with it's end goal - with its end goal
[x] ZIM_saffa_tariffs_desc:0 "Relations are still rocky between Salisbury and Pretoria, with neither wishing to make any accommodations towards each other. With this, we must impose harsh tariffs on any goods that hail from South Africa, till such a time the such accommodations are made."
the such accommodations - such accommodations
[x] ZIM_economic_boom_desc:0 "Salisbury has recovered from the Third Boer War, and it's economy has stabilized greatly."
it's economy - its economy
[x] ZIM_manpower_desc:0 "A rally cry has began in Salisbury, with it being heard as far as Broken Hill. Young men are flocking to our cause to supplement our forces to fight of the Boer menace."
has began - has begun
to fight of - to fight off
[x] ZIM_entente_advisors_desc:0 "With South Rhodesia looking to Ottawa with advisors assisting our armed forces work alongside those of the Entente."
work alongside - to work alongside
[x] ZIM_expand_arsenal_desc:0 "Guns, ammo and well greased logistic system wins wars, which South Rhodesia is lacking. This must be rectified."
wins wars - win wars (Two or more singular (or plural) subjects joined by and act as a plural compound subject and take a plural verb)
[x] ZIM_motorised_desc:0 "The concept of motorized infantry has been welcomed by the Southern Rhodesian Territorial Forces. With the ability to deploy and redeploy rapidly has allowed for great synergy with it's infantry hit and run tactics."
With the ability has allowed - remove "with"
with it's infantry - with its infantry
[x] ZIM_radar_desc:0 "South Rhodesia must keep it's ear to the ground and it's eyes to it's Neighbors."
it's ear - its ear
it's eyes - its eyes
it's Neighbors - its Neighbors
[x] zim.1.d:0 "Southern Rhodesians have had to hold their patience for years. Ever since we were sold out to appease the Boers of South Africa, we have been lobbying for the province's removal from the union and the establishment of responsible local government.\n\nWe never wanted to the use of violence to accomplish this goal, but Pretoria left us no choice with their illegal detachment of the Empire. Our electorate shares our concern, and the mobilization of our regiments is so far a great success."
We never wanted to the use of violence to accomplish this goal - We never wanted to use violence to accomplish this goal
[x] zim.4.d:0 "...\n\nHowever lot of the forfeit reserve lands has been bought by White farmers, and not all of those are willing to vacate their property when the government offers to buy it. ..."
lot of the forfeit reserve lands has been bought - a lot of the forfeited reserve lands have been bought
[x] zim.5.d:0 "Now that a constitution has been ratified for our country, it is time to hold elections. Unlike the backwards South African system, any Southern Rhodesian possesses the right to vote so long as they fulfil the property requirements of qualified franchise, although in Southern Rhodesia as well this means most of the electorate is white as they are where property is concentrated.
as they are where property is concentrated - as they are where the property is concentrated
[x] zim.35.d:0 "The now dubbed 'Third Boer' now becoming a terrible memory, the volunteers from "North Rhodesia" have began to either settle in South Rhodesia or to return home..."
have began - have begun
[x] zim.38.d:0 "In a broadcast could be heard all over Salisbury, the Entente Representive,[CAN.GetLeader] , offered his apologies for unable to attend in person. He went on to congratulate the people of Rhodesia, from all race, creed, and religion for remaining loyal to the crown, and that they haven't been forgotten. Once this broadcast was over, a second announcement was made with the renaming of the Rhodesian armed forces to "Royal Armed Forces of Rhodesia" and that a march will be held in the evening.\n That evening servicemen and women marched though streets of Salisbury to much fanfare and celebration. At the end of this, many young men and women were seen at the recruitment stand, to the glee of a many recruiting sergeants, who happened to also be attendance."
the Entente Representive,[CAN.GetLeader] , - the Entente Representive, [CAN.GetLeader],
from all race, creed, and religion for remaining loyal to the crown - from all races, creeds, and religions for remaining loyal to the crown
servicemen and women marched though streets - servicemen and women marched through the streets
to the glee of a many recruiting sergeants, who happened to also be attendance - to the glee of many recruiting sergeants, who happened to also be in attendance
[x] zim.40.d:0 "For better or worse, the South Rhodesian economy has been tied to South Africa since it's inception. With this in mind, attempts have been made by the South Rhodesian government to 'bury the axe' between the two nations and continue with commerce and trade with talks occurring in Cape Town in a hopes of an 'Economic Reconciliation' between the two nations, which would greatly benefit both nations."
since it's inception - since its inception
in a hopes - in hopes
[x] zim.41.d:0 "With the South Rhodesian diplomats being received by Cape Town, talks have began regarding the future of the two nations. The main focuses of the talks was commerce and trade with each representatives attempting to gain the best outcome for their nation. The South Rhodesians proposed a 'Economic Reconciliation' , which would allow..."
have began - have begun
The main focuses of the talks was - The main focus of the talks was
proposed a 'Economic Reconciliation' , - proposed an 'Economic Reconciliation',
[x] zim.44.d:0 "Industrial Conciliation Act is draws from it's South African counterpart with legislation to exclude blacks and other minorities from certain professions to protect white employees and their interests. The idea of the act is to protect White employees from competition in the labour market compared to the cheaper black employees, who are generally not recognized as workers.\nOf course there are those in the government that see this Act as draconic and backwards comparing to something akin to the confederate states of America."
Act is draws from it's South African counterpart - Act draws from its South African counterpart
this Act as draconic and backwards comparing to - this Act as draconic and backwards compared to
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[x] ZIM_idea_responsible_government_desc:0 "The white settler population had been lobbying for local responsible government for years, but the British South Africa Company, South Africa and Great Britain favoured integration into South Africa instead and forced the colony to integrate into South Africa as a province. But now, responsible government has finally been achieved, probably in a more extensive form than it would have ever been if it had been granted in 1922."
But now, responsible government - add an article
[x] ZIM_ECO_4_desc:0 "With a small boom in beef export, the South Rhodesia economy has began to stabilize"
has began - has begun
[x] ZIM_North_Int_desc:0 "Dubbed the Northern Initiative, Rhodesia wishes it to see it self as the bastion of British settlement in Africa. Though convincing others of this is going to a different story."
to see it self - to see itself
[x] ZIM_college_1_desc:0 "With expanding it's grounds, the government hopes the college becomes the think tank of Africa"
With expanding it's grounds - With expanding its grounds
[x] ZIM_sub_ult_eco_2_desc:0 "Further subsidies within the utility sector has lead to a small boom in the sector"
subsidies has lead - have lead
[x] ZIM_motorised_doctrine_idea_desc:0 "The concept of mobile warfare has been embraced by the Rhodesian High Command allowing for quick deployment of troops to supplement it's more elite formations"
it's more elite formations - its more elite formations
[x] ZIM_sf_1_desc:0 "Facing the problems of limited manpower, the Rhodesian armed forces has adopted the tactics of the Beor Kommando"
armed forces has adopted - armed forces have adopted (plural noun)
[x] ZIM_sf_2_desc_desc:0 "With the creation of the Selous Scouts unit, the Rhodesia truly now has a special forces to call it's own"
has a special forces - has special forces (plural noun)
to call it's own - to call its own
[x] ZIM_establish_gonarezhou_game_reserve_desc:0 "The Gonarezhou is vast and filled with beautiful wildlife, and we must keep it this way. We should consider declaring it a national reserve in order to better protect it's natural state."
it's natural state - its natural state
[x] ZIM_draft_constitution_desc:0 "A constitution will provide us with stability and certainty of future governance. It is of the utmost priority that a constitution for Southern Rhodesia be drafted."
be drafted - probably "is drafted"
[x] ZIM_cross_zambezi_desc:0 "Across the Zambezi lays North Rhodesia, taken from the British after the collapse of their empire, we have yet to be under the same flag. However, opportunity may just allow us to take back what is rightfully ours."
opportunity - add an article
[x] ZIM_industrial_conciliation_act_desc:0 "The Industrial Conciliation Act borrows heavily from it's South African counterpart with it's end goal to protect the interest of white workers over their black counterparts."
from it's South African counterpart - from its South African counterpart
with it's end goal - with its end goal
[x] ZIM_saffa_tariffs_desc:0 "Relations are still rocky between Salisbury and Pretoria, with neither wishing to make any accommodations towards each other. With this, we must impose harsh tariffs on any goods that hail from South Africa, till such a time the such accommodations are made."
the such accommodations - such accommodations
[x] ZIM_economic_boom_desc:0 "Salisbury has recovered from the Third Boer War, and it's economy has stabilized greatly."
it's economy - its economy
[x] ZIM_manpower_desc:0 "A rally cry has began in Salisbury, with it being heard as far as Broken Hill. Young men are flocking to our cause to supplement our forces to fight of the Boer menace."
has began - has begun
to fight of - to fight off
[x] ZIM_entente_advisors_desc:0 "With South Rhodesia looking to Ottawa with advisors assisting our armed forces work alongside those of the Entente."
work alongside - to work alongside
[x] ZIM_expand_arsenal_desc:0 "Guns, ammo and well greased logistic system wins wars, which South Rhodesia is lacking. This must be rectified."
wins wars - win wars (Two or more singular (or plural) subjects joined by and act as a plural compound subject and take a plural verb)
[x] ZIM_motorised_desc:0 "The concept of motorized infantry has been welcomed by the Southern Rhodesian Territorial Forces. With the ability to deploy and redeploy rapidly has allowed for great synergy with it's infantry hit and run tactics."
With the ability has allowed - remove "with"
with it's infantry - with its infantry
[x] ZIM_radar_desc:0 "South Rhodesia must keep it's ear to the ground and it's eyes to it's Neighbors."
it's ear - its ear
it's eyes - its eyes
it's Neighbors - its Neighbors
[x] zim.1.d:0 "Southern Rhodesians have had to hold their patience for years. Ever since we were sold out to appease the Boers of South Africa, we have been lobbying for the province's removal from the union and the establishment of responsible local government.\n\nWe never wanted to the use of violence to accomplish this goal, but Pretoria left us no choice with their illegal detachment of the Empire. Our electorate shares our concern, and the mobilization of our regiments is so far a great success."
We never wanted to the use of violence to accomplish this goal - We never wanted to use violence to accomplish this goal
[x] zim.4.d:0 "...\n\nHowever lot of the forfeit reserve lands has been bought by White farmers, and not all of those are willing to vacate their property when the government offers to buy it. ..."
lot of the forfeit reserve lands has been bought - a lot of the forfeited reserve lands have been bought
[x] zim.5.d:0 "Now that a constitution has been ratified for our country, it is time to hold elections. Unlike the backwards South African system, any Southern Rhodesian possesses the right to vote so long as they fulfil the property requirements of qualified franchise, although in Southern Rhodesia as well this means most of the electorate is white as they are where property is concentrated.
as they are where property is concentrated - as they are where the property is concentrated
[x] zim.35.d:0 "The now dubbed 'Third Boer' now becoming a terrible memory, the volunteers from "North Rhodesia" have began to either settle in South Rhodesia or to return home..."
have began - have begun
[x] zim.38.d:0 "In a broadcast could be heard all over Salisbury, the Entente Representive,[CAN.GetLeader] , offered his apologies for unable to attend in person. He went on to congratulate the people of Rhodesia, from all race, creed, and religion for remaining loyal to the crown, and that they haven't been forgotten. Once this broadcast was over, a second announcement was made with the renaming of the Rhodesian armed forces to "Royal Armed Forces of Rhodesia" and that a march will be held in the evening.\n That evening servicemen and women marched though streets of Salisbury to much fanfare and celebration. At the end of this, many young men and women were seen at the recruitment stand, to the glee of a many recruiting sergeants, who happened to also be attendance."
the Entente Representive,[CAN.GetLeader] , - the Entente Representive, [CAN.GetLeader],
from all race, creed, and religion for remaining loyal to the crown - from all races, creeds, and religions for remaining loyal to the crown
servicemen and women marched though streets - servicemen and women marched through the streets
to the glee of a many recruiting sergeants, who happened to also be attendance - to the glee of many recruiting sergeants, who happened to also be in attendance
[x] zim.40.d:0 "For better or worse, the South Rhodesian economy has been tied to South Africa since it's inception. With this in mind, attempts have been made by the South Rhodesian government to 'bury the axe' between the two nations and continue with commerce and trade with talks occurring in Cape Town in a hopes of an 'Economic Reconciliation' between the two nations, which would greatly benefit both nations."
since it's inception - since its inception
in a hopes - in hopes
[x] zim.41.d:0 "With the South Rhodesian diplomats being received by Cape Town, talks have began regarding the future of the two nations. The main focuses of the talks was commerce and trade with each representatives attempting to gain the best outcome for their nation. The South Rhodesians proposed a 'Economic Reconciliation' , which would allow..."
have began - have begun
The main focuses of the talks was - The main focus of the talks was
proposed a 'Economic Reconciliation' , - proposed an 'Economic Reconciliation',
[x] zim.44.d:0 "Industrial Conciliation Act is draws from it's South African counterpart with legislation to exclude blacks and other minorities from certain professions to protect white employees and their interests. The idea of the act is to protect White employees from competition in the labour market compared to the cheaper black employees, who are generally not recognized as workers.\nOf course there are those in the government that see this Act as draconic and backwards comparing to something akin to the confederate states of America."
Act is draws from it's South African counterpart - Act draws from its South African counterpart
this Act as draconic and backwards comparing to - this Act as draconic and backwards compared to
[x] zim.46.t:0 "Northern Initiative Redunant"
Northern Initiative Redunant - probably "Northern Initiative Redundant"