Closed Pelmen323 closed 3 years ago
The great majority of these have been implemented. Bear in mind though, for some stylistic allowances and romanticisations / vernacular in the text, and also try to avoid American English (organize / armor). Thank you for your report.
Quick questions HOI4 version: 1.10.4 Kaiserreich version: 0.16.1
KR_National_France_l_english.yml
[x] NFA_help_car_desc:0 "The Carlists are the only path Spain has to being made righteous once more. The Portuguese have convinced us this is the right faction to back, and, surely, if we support them, they would join our alliance should they succeed."
has to being made - has to be made (to-infinitive that follows the verb "has" requires the base form)
[x] NFA_Scapegoats_desc:0 "Even our most earnest efforts at fighting corruption has not given enough results to satisfy our people, and as such we might have to get more lax in finding proof of alleged corruption or be more proactive in getting confessions from suspected individuals. They probably did something wrong anyway, or they might be Communard agents, or something else: who cares, really?"
more lax - laxer (lax, laxer, laxest)
[ ] NFA_Small_Propaganda_desc:0 "Our first priority must be relief: France has been devastated by war, and our people are suffering, their homes are sometimes ruined, families have been torn apart by war, and many struggle to have access to even basic necessities. Not only is it our duty to care for and protect our countrymen, but such a relief effort will no doubt start to break down Communard propaganda that has depicted us as monsters for the last decades."
many struggle - many struggles
[x] NFA_Large_Scale_Effort_desc:0 "The immediate concerns of our people have begun to be answered, and it is now time to embark on a long and arduous journey: desyndicalistion. In less than twenty years, immense damage has been done by the Communards: their ideology has deeply tainted every aspect of French society, from social structures and the economy to education and the armed forces. Of course it is impossible to erase the past and some things will never be undone, and as such we will keep the good, tear down the bad, bring justice to those who deserve it, and ensure that never again our people are tempted by syndicalism.
desyndicalistion - desyndicalisation
Of course it is impossible - Of course, it is impossible
[x] NFA_Renovate_Marseille_desc:0 "Ever since the beginning of our expansion into Northern Africa, the port of Marseille has been an instrumental hub linking the Métropole and the colonies.While many businesses and industries that fled..."
colonies.While many - colonies. While many
[x] NFA_Revive_La_Rochelle_desc:0 "The importance of the harbour of La Rochelle has fallen ever since ourloss against the British back in the 1763 in
La Guerre de Conquête
, which largely sealed the fate of our New World colonial ambitions. With the new order in the world we can once againsince ourloss against the British - since our loss against the British
back in the 1763 - back in 1763
With the new order in the world we can - With the new order in the world, we can
[x] NFA_social_democrat_party_long:0 "...However, in the anti-Communard frenzy of the Exile, the party was quickly marginalised and is now a shell of its former shelf, though it could never have been called particularly influential.§!"
a shell of its former shelf - a shell of its former self
[x] Redressement_Francais_long:0 "...Advocating for a reorganization and \"streamlining\" of the administration and political system and a greater care of the upper classes for the \"social question\", they stand for class collaboration, strong property rights, and a greater involvement of \"patriotic industrialists and intellectuals\" in policy-making through specialized commissions...."
a greater care - greater care (uncountable noun)
a greater involvement - greater involvement (uncountable noun)
[x] POLITICS_PAUL_REYNAUD_DESC:0 "...Preferring a more active role as president, he hopes to implement his unorthodox economic ideas, shying away from free-market economics in favour of light dirigisme, making him a somewhat more amenable to the PSF."
making him a somewhat more amenable - making him somewhat more amenable
[x] NFA_internal_unrest_desc:0 "Years of inaction and politcal stagnation have caused many elements within the army and the population to become radicalized and lose faith in the current regime. Although it is supressed, contestation is slowly but surely growing within the French Republic."
politcal stagnation - political stagnation
is supressed - is suppressed
[x] NATFRA_granted_indemnities_idea_desc:0 "While some may have wished for everything to be returned to them, this government stipend must satisfy them instead. We would otherwise face an emboldened resistance if we were to attempt to seize all the previous owned possessions of the Exiles."
all the previous owned possessions - all the previously owned possessions
[x] NATFRA_compromise_committee_idea_desc:0 "We shall set up committees to oversee claims made on previously owned property to ensure that a delicate balance is maintained between the returning exiles and the population who have remained in the Métropole."
on previously owned property - on the previously owned property
[x] NATFRA_Return_Monarch_1_idea_desc:0 "The France that we have returned to is not the one that we left behind decades ago. The Communard government has drilled years of propaganda into the peoples heads blinding them to who built France into the country she is today! The monarchy built France in days past, and now the monarchy will rebuild France!"
the peoples heads - the people's heads
FOCUS TREE
[ ] NATFRA_War_in_our_Plates_desc:0 "All resources must be diverted towards the armed forces, for the liberation of France. This includes food, as before the war even starts we must create vast stockpiles of non-perishables goods: no soldier can fight on an empty stomach. As such a gradual rationing of essential goods will be implemented."
a gradual rationing - gradual rationing (uncountable noun)
[x] NATFRA_Policy_and_Strategy_desc:0 "Many of our Members of Parliament and state officials have some military experience, France is after all a nation of citizen-soldiers. However, they need to fully understand the stakes of the effort that is being asked of us all : frequent reports from the armed forces, as well as briefings on strategy and logistics, will ensure they have the tools to best serve the nation."
asked of us all : frequent reports - asked of us all: frequent reports
[x] NATFRA_Notre_Grand_Pere_a_Tous_desc:0 "Philippe Pétain, the Lion of Verdun, a man who gives himself entirely to France and her people, like a caring patriarch, firm but loving, experienced and ready to make all the sacrifices for his family. The Marshal who has led us through the storm of the exile will continue to do so until our patrie is reborn e, the French nation finally truly united behind him."
will continue to do so until our patrie is reborn e - ?
[x] NATFRA_Economic_Reform_desc:0 "France has always badly managed her economy, letting political passions control much of economic policy. The State must rebuild a trusting relationship with Capital, create advisory commissions of industrials, shrink the bureaucracy, reform our fiscality, protect property, and once and for all stop its ingerence in a field it has proved again and again it simply does not understand."
stop its ingerence in a field - stop its inference in a field
[x] NATFRA_Rebuild_The_Morale_Order_desc:0 "The Third Republic and it’s reckless liberalism and deeply anticlerical policies had degenerated into a corrupt, immoral mess that led France to defeat, that is plain to see..."
it’s reckless liberalism - its reckless liberalism
[ ] NATFRA_Restauration_desc:0 "Vive le Roi! The Kingdom is reborn, and though much work remains to be done, we are almost ready to take the first step towards the salvation of France: the coronation of Jean d’Orléans as rightful king of France..."
as rightful king of France - as the rightful king of France
[x] NATFRA_Protective_Inequality_desc:0 "The demagogic liberals pretended to make all men equals: this was of course folly..."
all men equals - all men equal
[x] NATFRA_Promote_Regional_Cultures_desc:0 "The République sought to destroy regional cultures and languages, dialects forbidden for anything official, particularly education..."
dialects forbidden - dialects were forbidden
[x] NATFRA_Corporatism_desc:0 "...In the past, the King protected the lower classes, abandoned, they became slaves of worshippers of Mammon: we say, no more!"
abandoned - probably "abandoned them"
[x] NATFRA_Egoism_of_each_helps_all_desc:0 "...As each strive for their best interests a mutually beneficial accord will be found, with the Crown acting as arbitrator to prevent any injustices from taking place."
As each strive - As each strives (indefinite pronoun "each")
acting as arbitrator - add an article
[x] NATFRA_Second_Union_Sacree_desc:0 "After months of political instability, Pétain has fallen and the Republic endures. After his election by the Parliament as president of the French Republic, General Henri Mordacq has chosen to take a step back and let a government of national unity headed by Colonel de La Rocque take charge, hoping for a return to normalcy after years of military junta."
after years of military junta - add an article
[x] NATFRA_reinforce_the_republican_school_system_desc:0 "Originally a product of the more liberal urban upper middle class, the Republic took generations to truly take root. One of its greatest weapons had been free, mandatory education, educating even the poorest and making sure that all receive republican values. Thanks to the \"black hussards of the Republic\", teachers, we will renew trust in our democratic system."
urban upper middle class - urban upper-middle class
black hussards of the Republic - black hussars of the Republic
[ ] NATFRA_attract_investments_from_the_entente_desc:0 "Our allies overseas have supported us through thick and thin, and many see this restoration of democracy as a great omen: with promise of support..."
with promise - add an article
[x] NATFRA_nationalize_weapons_manufactures_desc:0 "To make sure we are ready for the coming war, the government will nationalise part of the armament industry, making sure it is well prepared for the large effort necessary and that once the conflict is finally upon us, the delivery of our troops’ equipement goes as smoothly as possible."
equipement - equipment
[x] NATFRA_republicanization_of_the_army_desc:0 "Though the army played a critical role in the removal of Pétain from office, it is still a hotbed of reaction, as both junta loyalists and monarchists quietly ressent the new state of affairs..."
quietly ressent - quietly resent
[x] NATFRA_secure_labor_agreements_desc:0 "The absorption of the vast majority of unions into the BSPF has led to a large number of renegotiations of local agreements between employers and workers. Indeed, wherehas unions had formerly been defanged and isolated by state pressure, they can now count on a large support network and make demands without fearing repression, the Bureau making sure these demands remain reasonable."
wherehas - ?
[x] NATFRA_Establish_Supreme_Command_desc:0 "The Bear of Arras, Henri Mordacq has been given a free reign to reform the armed forces..."
given a free reign - given a free rein
[x] NATFRA_We_Win_Wars_with_Trucks_desc:0 "Horses have been part of warfare since times immemorial, and they are still widely used in our army for everything from reconnaissance to logistics. But the reformed French armed forces has to be a modern, fast army: the roles of our equine companions will gradually be filled by much faster, and much more resistant, trucks."
the reformed French armed forces has to be - the reformed French armed forces have to be
[x] NATFRA_Aeronavale_desc:0 "War at sea is an inevitability, as with our allies we must first get rid of syndicalist naval presence in the Western Mediterraean if we want to finally start the reconquest of the métropole..."
Western Mediterraean - Western Mediterranean
[x] NATFRA_Trade_Warfare_desc:0 "The Internationale might still hold on the mainland, but their war machine cannot run without the ressources sent to them from all over the world by syndicalist allies or unscrupulous neutral nations: by targeting ships transporting vital war resources bound for the Commune, we will easily be able to stall their red horde."
the ressources - the resources
[x] NATFRA_Ressource_Management_desc:0 "Not just the people, but the very soil of our nation must be put to contribute to help towards the war effort. Thankfully, we have access to the vast riches of the empire. Private war ressource exploitations will be heavily monitored to make sure that everything needed for the armed forces gets into the right hands and no delay is tolerated."
ressource exploitations - resource exploitations
[x] NATFRA_Death_and_Ruin_desc:0 "War is a tragedy. As such it must be quick, so that the orgy of violence can remain relatively limited. However, we cannot afford to let sentimentality get the better of us in these critical times, when the the very salvation of France is at stake: our war will be quick, because nothing will be held back: each artillery barrage, each bombing, each offensive will be decisive, no matter the costs for our enemies."
when the the very salvation - when the very salvation
[x] NATFRA_Total_Air_War_desc:0 "Many of the younger generation of officers argue for large scale use of air support for the infantry, but others have also suggested that we should not shy away from using our air force to destroy enemy infrastructure and industry in a more generalised manner: we are not in a position to avoid total war, and turning the enemies' ressources to rubble can only help us."
the enemies' ressources - the enemies' resources
[x] NATFRA_DEM_Barrage_desc:0 "To coordinate offensive and defensive efforts in the air, the ministry will generalise the use of Electromagnetic Detection, immense antennas placed in strategic points using electromagnetic waves to detect aircrafts."
to detect aircrafts - to detect aircraft (plural for of "aircraft" is "aircraft")
[x] NATFRA_Aircraft_Production_desc:0 "...Since then preparations for the next war have not stopped, especially since colonial conflicts have given us the opportunity to test our aircrafts. With war finally on the horizon, we will mobilize the industry to the fullest."
aircrafts - aircraft
With war - With the war
[x] NATFRA_Long_Range_Fighter_desc:0 "Corsica might be a floating airfield from which our planes can easily reach the mainland, but we nevertheless need fighters capable of patrolling the vast expanses of the Mediterreanean as well as escort our bombers deep into red territory to destroy the Commune’s industry. The Ministry will ensure that the development of heavy fighters is not neglected."
the Mediterreanean - the Mediterranean
into red territory - add an article
[x] NATFRA_New_Air_Tactics_desc:0 "The field of military aviation is a rapidly changing one, and our pilots must adapt their skills to ever changing technology: with new aircrafts come new possibilities..."
with new aircrafts - with new aircraft
[x] NATFRA_Ministry_of_Naval_Affairs_desc:0 "The Ministry of Naval Affairs, once tasked with overseeing the administration of both our colonies and our naval forces, is now solely dedicated to the needs of the Navy: control of Mediterrean will be essential to retake the Métropole, as such the ministry will make sure that our navy can stand up to the Internationale."
Mediterrean - Mediterranean
[x] NATFRA_A_World_Class_Navy_desc:0 "Most of the French navy accompanied our government in exile to North Africa, as such our navy is large but many of our ships are outdated. In its current state the navy could defend our shores, but it is uncertain how it would fare if someone were to attempt to contest our hold on the Western Mediterrenean. We will strive for a large scale overhaul."
In its current state the navy could defend our shores - In its current state, the navy could defend our shores
Western Mediterrenean - Western Mediterranean
a large scale overhaul - a large-scale overhaul
[x] NATFRA_An_African_Toulon_desc:0 "Toulon was the primary base of the Mediterrean fleet before the war.."
Mediterrean - Mediterranean
[x] NATFRA_Sea_Leviathans_desc:0 "We might not be able to compete with Germany or Japan in the naval arms race, but we certainly can attempt to knock out any of our Mediterrean opponents with well armed heavy battleships: this might go against previous doctrines, but our current situation means it is time for some innovation."
Mediterrean - Mediterranean
[x] NATFRA_Air_Carriers_desc:0 "The current naval arms race is misguided: by developing aircraft carriers, we will ensure that we can keep control over the Meditterean by bombing our enemies and sinking them to the depths of the sea before we are even within range of their guns."
Mediterrean - Mediterranean
[x] NATFRA_Preparing_Our_Return_desc:0 "To reconquer the métropole, we need to land on its shore, a fight that the Commune has been expecting for two decennies: it will be anything but simple. We must prepare as much as we can, as there will be no second chance. The Ministry will invest in the development of anything that could help our amphibious assault."
for two decennies - for two decennaries (for two decades)
[x] NATFRA_Sahara_Society_desc:0 "Our hold over our subsaharan colonies relies upon the safe passage of our ships through the straits of Gibralter and down the coast of Africa unhindered. Neither of those outcomes can be assured in any future wars. We must focus on the construction of a railline to link up Algeria with French West Africa below us!"
Gibralter - Gibraltar
[x] NATFRA_Meet_Local_Chief_desc:0 "In order to facilitate in the process of assimilation of the peoples of the colonies into French society..."
to facilitate in the process - to facilitate the process
[x] NATFRA_Algiers_Conference_desc:0 "With our return to the Métropole it is time to call together a gathering of senior officials from our colonial government to decide upon how we will govern them in the future. We will assemble native elites, administrators, represeants from the economic forces and missionaries to hash out a better colonial policy as the exile ends."
represeants from the economic forces - representatives from the economic forces
[x] NATFRA_Verdun_Memorial_desc:0 "The end of the Second Weltkrieg reminded to many the results of the first. Again, millions of people died in the war, villages were razed and the economy was destroyed. Opening a shared Franco-German memorial in Verdun to commemmorate the losses of the Weltkrieg could be the first step towards an agreement with the German Empire."
reminded to many the results of the first - reminded many of the results of the first
to commemmorate - to commemorate
[x] NATFRA_Christian_Unions_desc:0 "Pope Leo XII outlined in the encyclical Rerum Novarum the mutual duties and rights of capital and labour: among these is the right to unionise, and since then faithful Catholics workers have come together to defend their rights in faith-minded unions. These must be heavily promoted, to counterbalance any kind of remnant of socialist rhetoric among the working class."
faithful Catholics workers - faithful Catholic workers
EVENTS
[x] nfa.7.d:0 " ...If this essay is simply presented as a collection of observations on the confusion reigning among officers during the War, to some it seem to endorse the stab-in-the-back theory popular among civilians, soldiers, and officers alike. Especially considering de Gaulle’s proposal to prevent confusion at critical times is submission of the military to \"moral\" civilian power...."
to some it seem - to some it seems
is submission - add an article
[ ] nfa.13.d:0 "...Such a promotion will be seen by many as appointing a successor for the Lion of Verdun, now an old man. Should Mordacq be appointed, it is likely that he would be seen as Pétain’s successor, and the move would be perceived as a clear endorsement of Mordacq’s plans for sweeping military and political reform. Picking de Gaulle, a much younger man, closer to Pétain and a known sympathiser of the Marshal’s unabashed distrust of parliamentarianism, would certainly be perceived as a way to hold on to power for some more time while better preparing his eventual heir to succeed him...."
Such a promotion - Such promotion
parliamentarianism - parliamentarism
[x] nfa.22.d:0 "It was a foregone conclusion: the interview given by Marshal Pétain, giving his analysis and heartfelt thoughts on the current crisis on a popular radio proved immensely popular, with thousands of listeners tuning in all of the empire to listen to the words of the Lion of Verdun. The government can sigh a sigh of relief: despite all the slander, despite the attacks, the people has not abandoned the Marshal, at least, not yet."
the people has not abandoned - the people have not abandoned
[x] nfa.22.a:0 "Français! You have neither been sold or betrayed, nor abandoned."
You have neither been sold or betrayed, nor abandoned - You have neither been sold nor betrayed nor abandoned
[x] nfa.28.t:0 "Competetion Counter Hidden Event"
Competetion - Competition :)
[x] fa.33.d:0 "The civil administration is paralyzed by corruption, the state coffers are empty, and the army is led by sycophants and pompous upstarts. The failure of Pétain's government is unacceptable, and unless we act, soon the country will sink into chaos and it will be the end of us all. This must not be allowed to happen.\n\nTo save the nation, a secreet comitee led by Mordacq, the head of all the democratic parties and the generals on our side has been created in urgence.
a secreet comitee - a secret committee
created in urgency - created in urgency
[ ] nfa.36.d:0 "...General Mordacq immediately delivered a passionate speech broadcast on radio promising to free the République of corruption..."
broadcast on radio - broadcast on the radio
[x] nfa.37.d:0 "...Wanting to avoid making this trial too overtly partisan, Henri Mordacq has thus far stayed silent, however as president it his within his power to commute Pétain’s sentence. What should the Bear do?"
however as president it his within his power to - however as president it is within his power to
[x] nfa.38.d:0 "...Advocating for a reorganiation and streamlining of the administration and political system, a greater care of the upper classes for the social question as well as generally more class collaboration, strong property rights, a greater involvement of \"patriotic industrialists and intellectuals\" in policy-making through specialized commissions, along with a healthy dose of skepticism towards traditional parliamentary democracy that they consider bloated and in part responsible for the revolution, they have been decried by the more liberal opposition as technocratic, condescendingly paternalistic, and corporatist. Nevertheless, their support and expertise has proved invaluable for the regime..."
a reorganiation - a reorganization
their support and expertise has proved - their support and expertise have proved
[x] nfa.39.d:0 "The République is calm, surprisingly so. After months of turmoil, of intense debate, of protest, of media frenzy, it feels like everything is back in order. Marshal Pétain’s gamble to hold on power has paid off: with the Redressement Français’ precious help, he has managed to thoroughly secure the support of the upper classes, rekindle the admiration of the people, and calm down social unrest. The democratic camp still exists, but it has been severely weakened by media attacks and backroom deals with many of its more prominent partisans, its support base greatly eroded by the government’s promises of reform. It’s rumoured that Mordacq himself has struck a deal with the government. Many thought this would be the end of his regime, and yet Philippe Pétain emerges from this crisis stronger than ever: The Bear’s faction is no longer a threat, and the people once again has put its trust in the Lion of Verdun..."
After months of turmoil, of intense debate, of protest, of media frenzy, it feels like - After months of turmoil, intense debate, protest and media frenzy, it feels like
the people once again has put its trust - the people once again have put their trust
[ ] nfa.42.d:0 "....Coincidentally present in the building, General Mordacq immediately delivered a passionate speech broadcast on radio promising to free the République of corruption..."
broadcast on radio - broadcast on the radio
[x] nfa.43.d:0 "...While it’s undeniable that some supporters of Mordacq had ties to the more left wing pre-war parties and some of those arrested have confessed under strong interrogation techniques to being on the Commune’s payroll, the evidence of such collusion is light at best. Despite being offered a generous deal in exchange of his confession, Mordacq himself so far refuses to admit doing anything wrong..."
have confessed to being on the Commune’s payroll - have confessed of being / to be on the Commune’s payroll
in exchange of his confession - in exchange for his confession
[ ] nfa.51.d:0 "...resent in the building, the General immediately delivered a passionate speech broadcast on radio promising to free the République of corruption, maintain the fundamental liberties..."
broadcast on radio - broadcast on the radio
[x] nfa.53.d:0 "...However, part of the loss of ground for the democratic camp is the due to brutal tactics of the more radical elements of the French Action, who have organised themselves in a highly structured, secretive and independent group..."
is the due to - is due to
[x] nfa.55.d:0 "...\n\nAdvocating for a reorganization and streamlining of the administration and political system, a greater care of the upper classes for the social question as well as generally more class collaboration, strong property rights, a greater involvement of \"patriotic industrialists and intellectuals\" in policy-making through specialized commissions, along with a healthy does of skepticism towards traditional parliamentary democracy that they consider bloated and in part responsible for the revolution..."
with a healthy does of skepticism - with a healthy dose of skepticism
[x] nfa.57.d:0 "Today the last parade took place. Having been promised amnesty and reform, General Henri Mordacq personally came to the few soldiers and officers still protesting in Algiers and delivered a passionate speech thanking them for their support and sacrifices these past few months. Though he advised them to stay to stay vigilant, he also advocated goodwill towards the reformed regime for the good of France..."
he advised them to stay to stay vigilant - he advised them to stay vigilant
[x] nfa.59.d:0 "....Then, news came: the protesters has seized heavy machine guns, and chosen to fall back further and fortify a large plaza where a field hospital had been set up..."
the protesters has seized - the protesters have seized
[x] nfa.74.d:0 "A new dawn is rising on France. The Lion himself has come to make a speech in front of the National Assembly, broadcast on radio: citing his old age and ailing health, the tired Pétain announced his retirement, then proceeded to thank all those that supported him in the troubled times since the Grande Guerre, in particular veterans, making less than subtle references to Charles de Gaulle. His closing statement calling for peaceful transition of power and reaffirming his full trust in de Gaulle..."
broadcast on radio - broadcast on the radio
calling for peaceful transition - add an article
[x] nfa.76.d:0 "\"The National Assembly gives full powers to the Government of the Republic, under the authority of de Gaulle, to promulgate by one or more acts a new constitution of the French State\". By this simply motion, adopted unanimously, the destiny of France has changed for the better...As such, for the good of France and her people, as a subject, I hereby humbly ask monseigneur the Duke de Guise, heir of forty kings who over a millennia made France, to seize the crown and guide us towards the resurrection, the renewal of France...."
By this simply motion - By this simple motion
who over a millennia (plural) - who over a millennium (singular)
[ ] nfa.78.d:0 "It’s the trial of the century. Everyday, the audiences are broadcast on radio for the entire nation to listen to, while many in Algiers assemble outside of the courthouse to get as close as possible to the action...."
Everyday, the audiences are broadcast on radio - Every day, the audiences are broadcast on the radio
[x] nfa.86.d:0 "It’s the trial of the century, everyday, the audiences are broadcast on radio for the entire nation to listen to, while many in Algiers assemble outside of the courthouse to get as close as possible to the action. However, since the names of those accused was published and placarded everywhere, a new wave of violence has swept through the nation....The political disagreements of yesterday have turned into blind rage and some are even taking advantages of the general frenzy to settle personal feuds..."
everyday, the audiences are broadcast on radio - every day, the audiences are broadcast on the radio
turned into blind rage and some are even taking advantages - turned into a blind rage and some are even taking advantage
[x] nfa.105.d:0 "... As such, for the good of France and her people, as a subject, I hereby humbly ask monseigneur the Duke de Guise, heir of forty kings who over a millennia made France, to seize the crown and guide us towards the resurrection, the renewal of France..."
who over a millennia (plural) - who over a millennium (singular)
[x] nfa.87.d:0 "Contrary to the popular support which made militias arise spontaneously, it seems the Communard government has managed to convince some of the poor people of France. A few Communard supporters are committed to hinder our efforts at reclaiming the Métropole to save the syndicalist regime. Already they are hard at work sabatoging our infrastructure, raising dissent and organizing a resistance."
sabatoging - sabotaging
organizing a resistance - organizing resistance (uncountable noun)
[x] nfa.117.d:0 "Foolishly, it seems as though the Moroccans have decided to snub our demands and will not be letting us enter the Kingdom. This is an insult to France, and must surely be dealt with at once. The Morroccans will be punished for their mistake."
Morroccans - Moroccans
[x] nfa.120.d:0 "... While some in our government holds out hope that ..."
some in our government holds - some in our government hold (plural)
[x] nfa.122.d:0 "...While the French may be furious, our soldiers are not keen on the idea of remaining inside France to pacify any remaning communards who lurk in the shadows."
any remaning communards - any remaining communards
[x] nfa.125.d.5.bel:0 " ...This war has cost Germany a great deal of lives and materials, many of which were destroyed at the hands of the French. They are pushing for a short term economic reparations deal to help us recover the losses we took. An agreement to end hostilities for the near future while our nations rebuild is also required from the French. In exchange, we will turn over the land of occupied France that we hold.\n\nIn contrast, more Hawkish members of the diplomatic party have pushed forward an ambitious reparations agreement for the French to agree too..."
a great deal of lives and materials - a lot of / many lives and materials (a great deal of should be followed by an uncountable noun)
agreement for the French to agree too - agreement for the French to agree to
[x] nfa.125.d.5.wll:0 "The same part"
a great deal of lives and materials - a lot of / many lives and materials
agreement for the French to agree too - agreement for the French to agree to
[x] nfa.125.d.5.nobel:0 "The same part"
a great deal of lives and materials - a lot of / many lives and materials
agreement for the French to agree too - agreement for the French to agree to
[x] nfa.126.d:0 "...This war has cost Germany a great deal of lives and materials, many of which were destroyed at the hands of the French people. They are pushing for a short term economic reparations..."
a great deal of lives and materials - a lot of / many lives and materials
a short term economic reparations - a short-term economic reparations
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[x] nfa.155.d:0 "...Should we join with National France or should we declare ourself a legitimate authority on the region?"
declare ourself - declare ourselves
[x] nfa.155.a:0 "Ask National France for an union of our states."
an union - a union
[x] nfa.156.d:0 "The former French puppet government in Paris has been recently liberated and, following a new foreign policy, decided to consider us the rightful French government and ask for an union of our authorities..."
an union - a union
[x] nfa.161.d:0 "As the largest city in France, and the formal capital of the Commune of France, Paris will need some special effort to be integrated back into the new regime. Washing off syndicalist influence has to be a deep and thorough work. As a part of this effort, where should we direct our resources? We can either focus on lowering the unrest in the Capital or on making some longer term work to win the hearts of the people."
has to be a deep and thorough work - has to be deep and thorough work (uncountable noun)
longer term - longer-term
[x] nfa.162.d:0 ""As one of the most populous region in France, Provence will need some special effort to be integrated back into the new regime. Washing off syndicalist influence has to be a deep and thorough work. As a part of this effort, where should we direct our resources? We can either focus on lowering the unrest in the region or on making some longer term work to win the hearts of the people."
As one of the most populous region - As one of the most populous regions
has to be a deep and thorough work - has to be deep and thorough work (uncountable noun)
longer term - longer-term
[x] nfa.163.d:0 "nfa.163.d:0 "As one of the most populous city in France, Lyon will need some special effort to be integrated back into the new regime. Washing off syndicalist influence has to be a deep and thorough work. As a part of this effort, where should we direct our resources? We can either focus on lowering the unrest in the city or on making some longer term work to win the hearts of the people."
As one of the most populous city - As one of the most populous cities
has to be a deep and thorough work - has to be deep and thorough work (uncountable noun)
longer term - longer-term
[x] nfa.164.d:0 "
As one of the most populous city - As one of the most populous cities
has to be a deep and thorough work - has to be deep and thorough work (uncountable noun)
longer term - longer-term
[x] nfa.165.d:0 "
As one of the most populous city - As one of the most populous cities
has to be a deep and thorough work - has to be deep and thorough work (uncountable noun)
longer term - longer-term
[x] nfa.194.d:0 "The government of [FROM.GetNameDef] has refuseed to uphold their end of the bargain and will not return the ..."
has refuseed - has refused
[ ] nfa.196.d:0 "The restored government of France has approached us, accompanied by several French business leaders, to ask for an increased economic cooperation between our two countries. Under their plan, companies of our two countries would cooperate to invest in the Ruhr and in Northern France together, which would improve the economic link between us. All of this is part of a greater effort to bring a Detente between France and Germany, profit is a basis for a lasting peace. Should we go ahead with this plan?"
an increased economic cooperation - increased economic cooperation (uncountable noun)
for a lasting peace - for lasting peace (uncountable noun)
[x] nfa.197.d:0 "Great news! The German government has agreed to our plan for an improved economic cooperation. The companies involved in the deal will start to work together as soon as possible to ensure a shared prosperity to our two countries."
an improved economic cooperation - improved economic cooperation
a shared prosperity - shared prosperity (uncountable noun)
[x] nfa.198.d:0 "The news has come off unexpected. The German government refused our plan for an improved economic cooperation..."
unexpected - unexpectedly
an improved economic cooperation - improved economic cooperation
[x] nfa.199.d:0 "...The ambassador said the French government is hoping that the congress would be an occasion to draft an official peace and a deeper cooperation between Paris and Berlin. It would also be a rare moment to discuss the history and future of the troubled Franco-German relationship, a history filled with wars and rivalry, and Verdun being one of its symbol..."
a deeper cooperation - deeper cooperation
one of its symbol - one of its symbols
[x] nfa.202.d:0 "As long as the concepts of France and Germany have been separated by the splitting up of Charlemagne's empire, the two nations have been rivals. The kngdom of France fought the Holy Roman Empire more times than is possible to count, Napoleon created his empire on the grave of the the German one..."
The kngdom of France - The kingdom of France
of the the German one - of the German one
[x] nfa.203.d:0 "As long as the concepts of France and Germany have been separated by the splitting up of Charlemagne's empire, the two nations have been rivals. The kngdom of France fought the Holy Roman Empire more times than is possible to count, Napoleon created his empire on the grave of the the German one..."
The kngdom of France - The kingdom of France
of the the German one - of the German one
[x] nfa.204.d:0 "Long talks about the vanity of the historical Franco-German rivalry didn't suffice, it seems the Germans were unwilling to compromise and change our common future for good. The German foreign minister refused to work together to ensure a period of peace between our two nations, their only concession was to sign an unsignificant trade treaty instead. Needless to say our disappointment is immense but we learned that the Germans never change."
unsignificant trade treaty - insignificant trade treaty
Needless to say our disappointment - Needless to say, our disappointment
[x] nfa.209.d:0 "After the important declarations of our respective foreign ministers, a few days was enough to reach an agreement with the German Empire. An official pact of non-agression was signed between our two countries, making the Congress of Verdun a resounding success. We can rejoice that the Western front is finally going quiet."
non-agression - non-aggression
[x] nfa.210.d:0 "After the important declarations of our respective foreign ministers, a few days was enough to reach an agreement with the French. An official pact of non-agression was signed between our two countries, making the Congress of Verdun a resounding success. We can rejoice that the Western front is finally going quiet."
non-agression - non-aggression
[x] nfa.211.d:0 "The French have sent an ultimatum to Berlin. They are demanding that we hand over the Imperial Province of Elsass-Lothringen which hasn't been controlled by the French since 1871. The French are threatening with war if we refuse. This is te moment we must stand up to the French and resist their ambitions of world domination!"
This is te moment - This is the moment
[x] nfa.214.d:0 "Very surprisingly, the Germans have given into our demands and handed over Alsace-Lorraine . Our long lost region is finally home in its French motherland and as soon as we demobilise, we will hold a grand celebration in Paris for this glorious victory."
given into - given in to
over Alsace-Lorraine . - over Alsace-Lorraine.
[x] nfa.232.d:0 "...Pierre-Étienne Flandin, a man of the moderate right, former pilot elected to the Assembly at only 25 years old, whose skills as a knowledgeable technician made indispensable in parliamentary commissions, his advice sought after by the government and across political lines..."
former pilot - the former pilot
[x] nfa.244.d:0 "...The democratic political scene has had a hard time organising in exile but it now seems to be divided between a moderate left-wing tendency led by the Radicals and an union of conservative parties led by the PSF. After this election will come, as planned by the constitution, the election of the President for 7 years...."
an union - a union
[x] nfa.245.d:0 "...The General has made a name for himself in the war and is now a true popular figure, he will ensure the restored Republic wins the hearts of the people..."
a true popular figure - a truly popular figure
[x] nfa.272.d:0 "...our agents were attacked by stolen armored car and were forced to retreat..."
by stolen armored car - by a stolen armored car
[x] nfa.313.d:0 "The left, the Radicals, the moderates were all prime suspects. From municipal councillors to members of parliament, they had headed the Gueuse for decades, failing France at every turn, always pushing further for destruction of the Church, fanning the flames of socialism with their incompetence and demagogic promises.Those not already awaiting trial were arrested..."
for destruction - for the destruction
demagogic promises.Those not - demagogic promises. Those not
[x] nfa.314.d:0 "As expected, it didn’t take long for our investigations to find problematic elements within the police force, with a few cases of what appears to be revolutionary cells forming up. Thankfully, they were caught in time, and these policemen were persuaded by fellow officers, intelligence service and Camelots who happened to assist questioning sessions to give up any co conspirators who have slipped through the cracks. Some who had survived the last parade were particularly strongly advised to indicate whether their treason on that fateful day was spontaneous, or plannified..."
co conspirators - co-conspirators
plannified - planned
[ ] nfa.317.d:0 "Several months after our coming into power, we have been able to secure the loyalty of most fields of society. The police, the Second Bureau, the politicians, the army and the common men learned to be loyal to the King and the new regime and we can hope the remnants of the Republicans will not be trouble anymore..."
will not be trouble - will not be a trouble
[x] nfa.412.d:0 "...Now truly a whole new man, he is eventually tracked down by his wife but instead chooses to re-enlist under his real name, becoming a veritable hero and eventually being awarded the Legion of honour.The humorous tale has proven particularly popular among veterans."
of honour.The - of honour. The
[x] nfa.427.d:0 "October has traditionally been the time of the vintage, grape harvest for winemaking, and the occasion for popular festivities, wine, of course, being incredibly important to French culture. Viticulture in a region that is populated in the vast majority by alcohol-abstinent Muslims might seem peculiar, but Algeria is well suited for growing grapes, with it’s warm, sunny climate... Since the exile, business has of course been booming: viticulturists can barely keep up with the demand, as hundreds of thousands of Frenchmen each year consume bottle after bottle, and legal importation of wine from the métropole is of course impossible..."
being incredibly important - is incredibly important
with it’s warm, sunny climate - with its warm, sunny climate
business has of course been booming - the business has of course been booming
[x] nfa.428.d:0 "...He chronicles the slow descent into indignity of the working classes over the last century and a half, caused by usurious industrial capitalism and new illegitimate elites, culminating in the 1919 revolution..."
into indignity - into the indignity
[x] nfa.480.d:0 "Our forces in [senussi_resistance_state.GetName] have reported that something seems to be agitating the senussi in the region to become bolder in their resistance against our colonial rule. Garrison commanders have requested an increase in the forces stationed in the region to help keep our French citizens safe."
senussi - Senussi
[x] nfa.482.d:0 "In a brazen move, aimed at stopping senussi influence amongst our subjects, we have sent a detachement of the French army deep into the Sahara to raid their oases. Supported with modern rifles and air support, their Ikhwan stood no chance at stopping us but they were able to harass the French columns before retreating back into the deserts."
senussi - Senussi
a detachement - a detachment
[x] nfa.500.d:0 "...He had joined hoping to \"study the enemy\", a year later he would convert, two and he joined the Fransciscan Order..."
Fransciscan - Franciscan
[x] nfa.502.d:0 "...Something had to be done to prevent red propaganda being directly broadcasted to our people in that way, and this year was finally created a Tour d’Algérie. Going through most major towns of the Algerian littoral, such as Orléanville, Oran, Bone, starting and ending in Algier, with even a detour through Tunisia, the race was a massive popular success, giving bicycle racing fans the euphoria of a national sporting competitions they had seeked for close to two decades by now. .."
prevent red propaganda being - prevent red propaganda from being
a national sporting competitions - a national sporting competition
had seeked - had sought
[x] nfa.504.d:0 "...Orliac was then integrated in the troop, once in a simple recruit uniform only somewhat standing out from his peers.\nTruth is, Henri was not an ordinary recruit: his real name is Henri d'Orléans, royal prince of the House of France. In the Great War, his father too had attempted to join the Foreign Legion but was denied from it due the Law of Exile barring representatives of the former reigning houses from setting foot in France..."
integrated in the troop - integrated into the troop
royal prince - a royal prince
was denied from it due the Law - was denied from it due to the Law
[x] nfa.505.d:0 "...Institute have signed a common appeal to the world to undermine the efforts of these 'perverts' and 'bohemians', and penned a manifesto in which they call for the creation of a international 'Institute of Occident' to fight the 'vanguard of inculture'...."
a international - an international
[x] nfa.507.d:0 "...Indeed, one of stated goals of the Association is to foster the Islamic identity of Algeria, to unite the people..."
one of stated goals - one of the stated goals
[x] nfa.519.d:0 "Today, tens of thousands of people from all over Algeria were present at Sheikh Abdelhamid Ben Badis’ funeral. Coming from a prestigious family of ulema, claiming to be descendents from the medieval Zyrid dynasty.."
descendents - descendants
[x] nfa.525.d:0 "While our rightful capital Paris is still out of our reach, our efforts have led us to settle for the next best thing: Marseillle. .."
Marseillle - Marseille
[x] nfa.528.d:0 "...is creating of wave of passion across Europe and beyond.."
wave - add an article
[ ] nfa.535.d:0 "...These devout Catholics, many of them royalists, headed by Baron Athanase de Charette de La Contrie, descendant of a famous leader of the Vendée insurrection, nevertheless set aside their differences with the Republic to fight against the Prussian aggressor..."
descendant - add an article
[ ] nfa.541.d:0 "... On the other hand, a minority desires a total rejection of anything brought by the revolution, arguing that we could not fight one revolution while the embers of the previous one still burn ....
still burn - still burning
[x] nfa.445.d:0 "...It seems this section of track is an usual target for local Guinean terrorists and resistants, we can expect more actions of the sort to happen."
an usual target - a usual target
[x] nfa.460.t:0 "Terrorist Attack on the a Tunisian Railway!"
on the a Tunisian Railway - delete one article
[x] nfa.461.d:0 "...We will remove these leaflets as usual and as soon as possible to prevent these ideas of spreading more."
to prevent these ideas of spreading - to prevent these ideas from spreading
[x] nfa.468.d:0 "The colony of Senegal, the most 'civilized' of all West African ones, and home to the port of Dakar, is usually calm. Tensions are exceptionally low between the population and the colonial government. This is why the announce of a miners' strike went as a shock for the colonial authorities..."
the announce - the announcement
[x] nfa.470.d:0 "Our source about this issue is a French member of the colonial administration in Dakar, invited by friends to a mondane dinner in which rich French and Black 'évolués' (evoluted) merchants sat together. The administrator expected a friendly atmosphere, after all the 'évolués' have the French citizenship and hold a lot of privileges compared to their black lower class counterparts, suffering under the Code de l'Indigénat. His surprise was thus big when he heard a group of 'évolués' talk about how could Senegal organise itself after an independence..."
to a mondane dinner - to a mundane dinner
after an independence - after independence (uncountable noun)
[ ] nfa.600.d:0 "...They have now assembled a strong enough force to declare independence themselves and have also declared open revolt against our rule."
open revolt - an open revolt
[x] nfa.614.d:0 "When we started our revolt, no one knows what it was going to lead too, some were pessimistic, others more optimistic but everyone was determined to fight for our independence..."
it was going to lead too - t was going to lead to
[x] fa.624.d:0 "We have lost control. The Empire of thousands of square kilometers, spanning several ancient kingdoms and thousands of ecosystems, lakes, savananas and forests we built of ourselves in Africa is no longer in our control. Our army was pushed back by native revolts, revealing themselves way more organised and efficient that we first thought. The first defeat came off as a terrible blow, but then it kept getting downhill, until putting our heartland of Algeria in danger. The situation is truly hopeless. Our only chance to survive more than a few weeks is now to recognise the independance of all of the native states and retreat back to Algeria where we can hope to reorganise and defend our nation. With a bit of luck and an efficient fight against Algerian and internal troublemakers maybe we will be able to stay afoot? Maybe this won't be the end for us... right?"
savananas - savannas
that we first thought - than we first thought
the independance - the independence
[x] nfa.626.d:0 "With the total collapse of their African ally, the Entente have come to the realisation that this war is over.They have been defeated and we won, and there is no reason to continue this fight any longer..."
is over.They - is over. They
[x] NFA_PIERRE_BOYER_ARMY_DESC:"Pierre Boyer de Latour du Moulin was born in Maisons-Laffitte on 18 June 1896 and is one of the youngest officers in the exiled French army. He would enlist at the outbreak of the Weltkrieg in August 1914, and would serve in the dragoons until 1916, where at his request, he was transferred to the first Moroccan infantry regiment where he served for the rest of the war. At wars end he had been temporarily promoted to lieutenant and would be in Africa when the Third Republic capitulated.
At wars end - At war's end
[x] NFA_FRANCOIS_DARLAN_NAVY_DESC:"Jean Louis Xavier François Darlan was born on 7 August 1881 in Nérac to a family long connected to the navy. He would graduate from the École Navale in 1902, and during the Weltkrieg would notably serve in an artillery battery at the Battle of Verdun. During the chaos of the revolution Darlan would rejoin the navy in Algiers and would over the next several years would rise rapidly through the ranks.."
would over the next several years would rise rapidly through the ranks - 2x would, remove one of them
[x] NFA_JEAN-PIERRE_ESTEVA_NAVY_DESC:"Jean-Pierre Estava was born on 14 September 1880 in Reims. He would join the Navy in 1898, serving on a variety of ships in Asia and the Mediterranean. In 1910 he would be promoted to Lieutenant de vaisseau and would continue to serve in serve on multiple ships. During the Weltkrieg he would participate in the Dardanelles campaign on board the cruiser Jeanne D’Arc, and would be wounded in the process by a large shell. For this injury he would receive the Croix de guerre, and after recovering would be assigned as deputy to the head of Ports and Maritime Communications Service. Later he would command the Jeanne-et-Genevieve, where he would duel with German sub on 6 August 1917 and receive a citation for his victory..."
continue to serve in serve on multiple ships - continue to serve in service on multiple ships
duel with German sub - duel with the German sub