HOL - quick localisation check

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Quick questions HOI4 version: 1.10.4 Kaiserreich version: master pulled 14.04.2021

KR_Netherlands_l_english.yml

• [x] HOL_idea_peoples_military_desc:0 "There is a new order in the Netherlands, and our military now reflect its origins. It is made up of people, and for the people."

• military reflect - military now reflects (if used as "the military establishment" - with a singular verb)

• [x] HOL_red_advisors_desc:0 "The agent of R.E.D are now providing the fledging Dutch People's Army with much needed direction and guidance."

• The agent of R.E.D are - The agents of R.E.D are

• [x] HOL_british_designs_tanks_desc:0 "A gap has been left in the Dutch army in the execution of armoured warfare tactics, and tank designs. Though with British designs, and Dutch ingenuity, we the Dutch are seek bridge this gap"

• we the Dutch are seek bridge this gap - we the Dutch are seeking to bridge this gap / seek to bridge (just as an example. The current loc is incorrect either way)

• [x] HOL_red_navy_desc:0 "With most it's navy fleeing with the Dutch royalty. The new Volksmarine, having lost most of it's expertise, it's new admirality has set more realistic expectations in ship construction."

• it's expertise, it's new admirality - its expertise, its new admiralty

• [x] HOL_join_internationale_desc:0 "The revolution came to the Netherlands and has been entrenched. Thus the time has come for us to join the Internationale and help export the Revolution, aiding in the liberation the working class beyond merely our own tiny country."

• the liberation the working class - the liberation of the working class

• [x] HOL_relations_south_africa_desc:0 "South Africa is populated by a number of Dutch-descent Boers, making its political fate in this troubled times particularly concerning to our own domestic political scene. There have been a number of calls from all sides of the left-right spectrum to consider our approach."

• in this troubled times - in these troubled times

• [x] HOL_more_spending_power_desc:0 "Our large investments in the military is resulting in people finding work across a number of sectors..."

• investments in the military is resulting - investments in the military are resulting

• [x] HOL_Enshrine_Leninism_desc:0 "The now pasted Russian Marxist revolutionary Vladimir Lenin stated that the proletariat shall rise up against their capitalist enslavers, and be the vanguard of the revolution. We shall follow in this great man's footsteeps."

• footsteeps - footsteeps

• [x] HOL_Rebuild_The_Bureaucracy_desc:0 "The stain of the previous administration will take years to completly remove. Though we make steps to purge ourselves of their captialist bureaucracy, and replace it with one that cares for the worker."

• completly - completely

• captialist bureaucracy - capitalist bureaucracy

• [x] HOL_English_Advisors_desc:0 "The Men from R.E.D 'Revolutionary Exportation Directory' have been working from the shadows for years, evading the capitalists's GS III agency, and assisting with the revolution. Now that the Proletariat have arisen, they have switched roles to assist the us in rebuilding the Nederlander Volksleger (NV)."

• capitalists's GS III agency - capitalists' GS III agency

• to assist the us in rebuilding - to assist us in rebuilding

• [x] HOL_Red_Sky_desc:0 "Though we are a nation of traders, and builders, our population is much smaller then those that are at the gates. We shall use shells not men to keep the enemies back, with our proud worker providing them at a steady pace."

• much smaller then those - much smaller than those

• [x] HOL_Red_Armour_desc:0 ""A gap has been left in the our army in the execution of armoured warfare tactics, and tank designs. Though with English designs, and Dutch ingenuity, we the Dutch are seek bridge this gap""

• Check the usage of the quotes

• left in the our army - left in our army

• we the Dutch are seek bridge this gap - we the Dutch are seeking to bridge this gap / seek to bridge (just as an example. The current loc is incorrect either way)

• [x] HOL_Red_Navy_AC_desc:0 "The cost benefit analysis to build new Battleships, and Pantserschip has shown that they are outdated as they leave the shipwrights. A bold, new radical apporoach would see "Vlootplan Furstner" reviewed, and implemented for our Navy."

• apporoach - approach

• [x] HOL_Red_Vesting_desc:0 "Reversing the defensive plans by Winkelman, will have our forts face the Germans, and not our comardes."

• comardes - comrades/camarades

• [x] HOL_Red_Missles_desc:0 "Furthering our Red Sky Initiative, Rockets, and similar ordinance is being researchd, and constructed to rain down upon our enemies."

• Furthering our Red Sky Initiative, Rockets, and similar ordinance is being researchd - Rockets and similar ordinance are being researched (rockets and ammo are being researched)

• [x] HOL_Red_Air_desc:0 "With many of our previous members of the Luchtmacht leaving, like our navy, we have been forced to start of scratch. Our only saving grace is they left the planes behind for us..."

• to start of scratch - to start from scratch

• [x] HOL_CS6_desc:0 "The CS 6 was formed under the auspices of R.E.D agents, with the orgin of it's name lost. It's goal is to help preserve syndicalist ideology within [HOL.getname].. by any means"

• with the orgin of it's name lost - with the origin of its name lost

• It's goal is - Its goal is

• [x] HOL_restore_democracy_desc:0 "The dangers of syndicalism and populism have been averted. There is no more need for a correctionary junta and the time has come to restore democratic rule to the Netherlands."

• correctionary junta - reactionary junta (this junta is not probably reviewing the loc files :))

• [x] HOL_dutch_GS_III_desc:0 "Third Department of the General Staff was established during the early days of the Weltkrieg. It's goal was to ensure monitor both the Central Powers, or the Entente, to provide insight in the going-ons, and to ensure no ill will was to be directed at the Netherlands. Now with Radicalism on the rise, the GS III has been called on again to defend the Netherlands from enemies that are both foreign and domesitc..."

• It's goal - Its goal

• the going-ons - either the going-on or the goings-on

• domesitc - domestic

• [x] HOL_Mil_Acad_desc:0 "The Royal Military Academy (KAM) has been supplying the Army, and the Marechaussee (National Police) with fresh commissioned officers since 1828. With the Weltkrieg over, and with many officers on both side of the conflict now retiring. We should seek them to impart their knowledge, and experiences on our cadets, to better them."

• on both side of the conflict - on both sides of the conflict

• [x] HOL_Genietroepen_desc:0 "The more moving parts that are required, the more the need for military engineers is required to ensure that things keep on rolling foward"

• foward - forward

• The more moving parts that are required, the more the need for military engineers is required - as a suggestion, rephrase this part. For example: The more moving parts in our Army, the more military engineers are required to keep or rolling forward

• [x] HOL_mech_infantry_desc:0 "Developed in the Dutch East Indies, the Braat Overvalwagen is a cheap to make armoured personel carrier. We can consider adopting this design for the mainland army as well."

• the Braat Overvalwagen is a cheap to make armoured personel carrier - again, as a suggestion - the Braat Overvalwagen is cheap enough to make armoured personnel carrier ("is a cheap to make" and "personnel")

• [x] HOL_vlootplan_furstner_desc:0 "We must radically alter our navy's composition. It is being made increasingly clear that battleships are being made redudant by the ever improving potency of the airplane. We need to expand on our existing carrier and her capabilities, and if possible acquire more naval airpower!"

• redudant - redundant

• [x] HOL_vlootplan_helfrich_desc:0 "We simply do not possess the means to compete with Japan or any other major navy on the surface waters, hence Admiral Helfrich proposes that we outfit our navy with the ships we can also build best, submarines, and harass enemy merchantile shipping and troop transports while we protect our own!"

• merchantile shipping - either mercantile shipping or merchant shipping

• [x] HOL_destroyer_escort_asw_desc:0 "By far the greatest danger to our merchant fleet is not via the air, nor the few odd commerce raiders about, but hiding under water untill it might be too late to act. We thus must outfit our destroyers with the latest Anti Submarine equipment to deal with this threat."

• hiding under water untill it - hiding underwater until it

• [x] HOL_rdm_desc:0 "The Rotterdamsche Droogdok Maatschappij has a dedicated submarine wharves which hosts talented engineers to provide us with the latest submarine designs and innovations...."

• wharves which hosts - wharves which host

• [x] OL_dutch_airforce_desc:0 "Airpower has already shown to be useful in the Weltkrieg, and we can only anticipate it's need increasing. We need to lay a firm foundation for airpower in the Netherlands to keep up with foreign enemies."

• it's need increasing - its need increasing

• [x] HOL_fokker_jachtkruiser_desc:0 "A twin engined fighter might not be as fast and nimble, yet the proposed 'Jachtkruisers' by Fokker carry a deadly pack of machineguns, have a much longer range and can potentailly be equipped with a bomb load of their own, making them versatile planes."

• potentailly - potentially

• [x] HOL_tactical_tactics_desc:0 "Our twin engined planes are not just simple bombers, with their 20mm cannon installed in the nose installed they are like the cruisers of the air! They might not be fast, but an be a serious threat to other bombers, as well as enemy fighters whom decide to attack them frontally!"

• They might not be fast, but an be a serious threat - They might not be fast, but can be a serious threat

• enemy fighters whom decide to attack - enemy fighters who decide to attack

• [x] holel.4.d:0 "...We could assuage their concerns and form a proper coalition with the CNA, if only to pacify the public and make the transition easier, or we could could let the Landwacht 'convince' parliament to give us emergency powers."

• we could could let - we could let

• [x] hol.15.d:0 "...A select coterie of loyal revolutionaryes plans to capture them before they flee from the Netherlands."

• revolutionaryes - revolutionaries

• [x] hol.37.e:0 "Delay the reclaimation of the Zuiderzee indefinitely."

• reclaimation - reclamation

• [x] hol.39.d:0 "All ships planned by the naval expansion are now completed, allowing us project our naval power more efficiently."

• hol.41.d:0 "

• hol.44.d:0 "

• allowing us project - allowing us to project

• [x] hol.201.d:0 "The Admiralty is discussing the best way to proceed onwards. Our resources are limited, so a plan is needs to be devised on how to make use of our naval assets the most.\n\nSome of the admirality place our merchant fleet above all. They believe that if we merchant fleet is unable to operate, our country will be reduced to poverty. They want to emphasise the need of our navy to protect the fleet with fast surface ships, and if possible harass the fleet of potential adversaries with submarines.\nArguments to focus on large surface ships to protect our vital colonies from a potential Japanese incursion are also heared. Our capital ships are reaching an respectable vintage and will probably not be able to protect the Dutch East Indies in particular if they are not modernised or even expanded in number."

• a plan is needs to be devised - a plan is needed to be devised

• admirality - admiralty

• if we merchant fleet is unable to operate - if the merchant fleet is unable to operate

• are also heared - are also heard

• an respectable vintage - a respectable vintage

• [x] holfocus.4.d:0 "Although the vast majority of our resources come from our colonies, our homeland should also harbour some resources we have not yet unconvered.\n\nGeological surveys in Brabant have found traces of tungsten, a resource we thus far completly lack.

• have not yet unconvered - have not yet uncovered

• completly lack - completely lack

• [x] holfocus.5.d:0 "Our mining efforts are successful, there is indeed usuable iron in the mines of Limburg, boosting our steel production considerably!"

• usuable - usable

• [x] holfocus.18.d:0 "...Around 10 a group of around seventy-five Landwachters were spotted marching into the Palace on the edge of Dam Square..."

• a group were spotted - was spotted

• [x] holfocus.29.d:0 "A large problem iss that a lot old-guard officers in our military is member of the VNH at the behalf of their 'moderate-but-still-authoritarian' faction. This undermines the reliability of our military and makes a putsch by the VNH possible. We are determined to change this, and moreso by altering their party rules."

• iss that a lot old-guard officers in our military is member of the VNH - is that a lot of old-guard officers in our military are members of the VNH

• at the behalf of - on behalf of

• moreso - more so

• [x] holfocus.45.a:0 "No, its better to just leave it at this!"

• its better - it's better

• [x] holfocus.53.d:0 "Our 'partners', the VNH, have publicly denounced the way we handeled the German diplomatic row, saying that we failed to do what it took to serve our country's best interesdt and that we let the German violate our sovereignty. So much for our deal."

• we handeled - we handled

• interesdt - interest

• [x] holfocus.54.a:0 "We need new elections in a few month time!"

• in a few month time - in a few months time

• [x] holfocus.56.d:0 "...Queen Wilhelmina has refused to give Albarda the posto of Formateur..."

• posto - post

• [x] holnavy.6.b.tt:0 "§YGrants an heavily armed but slow Armoured Cruiser variant.§!\n"

• an heavily - a heavily

• [x] holnavy.7.a.tt:0 "§YGrants a specialised anti-aircraft cruiser variant of the cucrrent tech level.§!\n"

• cucrrent - current

• [x] holnavy.8.d:0 "We currently posses..."

• posses - possess

• [x] holfocus.400.a:0 "Lets build them!"

• holfocus.401.a:0 "Lets build them!"

• holfocus.401.b:0 "Lets build them!"

• Lets - Let's

• [x] holflavor.8.d:0 "As a result of the brutal economic crisis, the Kröller-Müller aristocratic family is unable to afford the maintainance of their hunting grounds in the Veluwe.

• maintainance - maintenance

• [x] holdei.1.d:0 "...e can try to industralise the colony rapidly which will be beneficial for both us and the natives. However, we must keep in mind that pushing too hard might trigger some unwanted concequences..."

• to industralise - to industrialise

• concequences - consequences

• [x] HOL_naval_decisions_desc:0 "\"De Koninklijke Marine\", the Dutch navy, was once the most powerful naval force in the world, with it's very name able to strike fear into our enemies.."

• it's very name - its very name

• [x] HOL_red_navy_1_desc:0 "The lack of a fleet"

• unfinished loc

• [x] The following loc it redundant: HOL_light_carrier:0 "A New light Carrier" HOL_light_carrier_desc:0 "" HOL_bc_doorman:0 "Our Biggest Cruisers Ever" HOL_bc_doorman_desc:0 "" HOL_focusnaam:0 "Tekst." HOL_focusnaam_desc:0 ""

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